kingjamez BBW VIP Joined Feb 13, 2006 Messages 7,253 Likes 0 Points 36 May 13, 2007 #2 good start. I think text could be better, and I think left side is a little plain
7Goat BBW Hip-Hop Head Joined Feb 22, 2006 Messages 6,924 Likes 0 Points 36 May 13, 2007 #3 I think you added stuff just because it looks cool. It all doesn't flow though. I would just trash this and start over
I think you added stuff just because it looks cool. It all doesn't flow though. I would just trash this and start over
KCX BBW VIP Joined May 19, 2006 Messages 5,043 Likes 0 Points 36 May 13, 2007 #4 nah dont trash it, it just doesn't seem finished and unblended. maybe work alittle more on it
MaRdYC26 BBW Graphics Team Joined Feb 10, 2006 Messages 2,343 Likes 0 Points 36 May 13, 2007 #5 The coloring sucks, and the right side has no flow.