first wall

[lotza]

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/3935/ta...sjackson6mj.jpghelp me out pleaseooh and what text should i use

 

[iknobaer]

you need a lot more detail in your bg, i dont like how jackson's head gets cut off, and for text, dont ask me, thats my biggest problem toonot bad for a first tho

 

[lotza]

anyone else?i neeed help w/ this

 

[Brooksie5]

I think it looks sweet.. just need some text somewhere. But I'm not a graphic guru, so I can't really help.

 

[kevhead]

I think its really good but it seems a bit incomplete. The BG could use more detail, such as stocks, etc.

 

[lotza]