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[sov300]

Ok so i have a blog http://www.thelockerroomblog.com/
it has lots of articles and is continually updated. If you like my writing here please check it out. I know I'm going to get attacked for spamming but i swear im not. You guys have great sports opinions and it would be great if you would take just five minutes out of your day to check it out and keep looking at it. I work real hard at it but i got not a lot of views. Im sorry this was my last resort but please click the link!

Thanks,

sov300

 

[jlprk]

All that your uninviting intro page has is the title of each article. The titles don't describe the articles so they don't motivate anyone to click on them. These titles suck.

Free Agent Fantasy
Beginner's Luck
August gets even hotter
Shocker!
Haloti Ngata
Podcast July 29

Either make the titles more descriptive, or include a sample of each article on the front page. If in doubt, just imitate how ESPN and Yahoo do it.

 

[SlyPokerDog]

All that your uninviting intro page has is the title of each article. The titles don't describe the articles so they don't motivate anyone to click on them. These titles suck.

Free Agent Fantasy
Beginner's Luck
August gets even hotter
Shocker!
Haloti Ngata
Podcast July 29

Either make the titles more descriptive, or include a sample of each article on the front page. If in doubt, just imitate how ESPN and Yahoo do it.

But besides from that great job!

 

[sov300]

All that your uninviting intro page has is the title of each article. The titles don't describe the articles so they don't motivate anyone to click on them. These titles suck.

Free Agent Fantasy
Beginner's Luck
August gets even hotter
Shocker!
Haloti Ngata
Podcast July 29

Either make the titles more descriptive, or include a sample of each article on the front page. If in doubt, just imitate how ESPN and Yahoo do it.

thanks, i'll try to do just that!

 

[THE HCP]

If you want people to go to your web site, you should interview somebody famous like myself.

 

[BrianFromWA]

Speed hasn't been around for a while, and Travis is fishing.

 

[sov300]

If you want people to go to your web site, you should interview somebody famous like myself.

alright! haha

 

[sov300]

Speed hasn't been around for a while, and Travis is fishing.

huh?

 

[THE HCP]

Tell him how Baller I am guys! Instant credibility!

 

[sov300]

baller

 

[sov300]

ok so i changed it to include a slider like espn and yahoo check it out now
http://www.thelockerroomblog.com

 

[jlprk]

That's a little better, but you need to get more stuff onto the first screen the viewer sees, so we don't have to arrow around aimlessly wondering why we're doing this. Try single space instead of double space. The blurbs on the right should describe the pictures on the left.

 

[sov300]

ok thanks!