I could use some input on this work in progress

[GMJ]

This is where I'm at now. When all is said and done the "GMJ" won't be as big, it's just that I don't think this looks that great and was wondering if you guys had any advice.

 

[Chutney]

I love the text, it's real original. Maybe there's a way to make it stand out a little more from the background (it seems to blend in since it has the same colour).

 

[pegs]

Why is it so green?

 

[GMJ]

That's just me trying to make the color more artsy. You don't think it looks good?

 

[pegs]

I think it looks a little Boston-Celticsy

 

[bbwtrench]

Not a fan of the color. You could blend it a bit more and text has to go... Kosmic text correct? Good for wallpapers, not for signatures IMO

 

[Young Guru]

its oversharpened bro

 

[GMJ]

hmm, yeah I see that in the text. Thanks for the input!

 

[M Two One]

I'd say change the text. You've used it before and I've been using it for years now. Getting a bit boring to me. The graphics are bad ass though, good work, bro.

 

[Vintage]

JMO: I like it... but I think it needs less green; more Nets blue.


Edit: But it will forever pale in comparison to my avatar.

 

[Dumpy]

there's too much glare on his right arm and the surrounding area.

 

[GMJ]

Thanks for the input guys. I ended up just scrapping everything and going with this one

 

[Dumpy]

Thanks for the input guys. I ended up just scrapping everything and going with this one

you're quite good at this. can you make one of my kids?

 

[GMJ]

Sure. Just let me know what you're after.

 

[cpawfan]

Make it so they are dunking on Vince and Boone

 

[Dumpy]

Sure. Just let me know what you're after.

hm, I guess something completely over the top, but it will depend on the photos I can dig up.

 

[GMJ]

Sure. Send me a PM when you're ready

 

[bbwtrench]

Thanks for the input guys. I ended up just scrapping everything and going with this one

This looks better. More color though!