BG is pretty plain.Pic effect is bad because its too dark. Cant even really tell if that was Jordan or not without the text there. And the text aint that hot either. Fix those things up and come back with a v2.
Don't like this one much, definently not your best work. The pic effect is too dark, the background is pretty plain, and I don't like the text much. You've done much better, so just keep trying.