background looks like a premade? left cut could use some effects and a bit of blending and the right cut is blended in alright.. logo isnt blended in that well and the text is alright but should be a different colour coz its kinda hard to read.. 6/10
It's your first so I won't blame you for anything, I suggest you start to make your own backgrounds straight away instead of using C4D's and premades because then you'll get better quicker.