Semifinals - Junoon vs Smitty

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Congrats to all that have made it thus far. You are now in the semifinals, and only two steps away from capturing the crown. Whoever has made it thus far can automatically be categorized as a JBB MC legend. But who will go on to capture the crown? Good luck to all, and may the best advance to the finals.

Junoon vs Smitty

The battles will last 3 days, but if nothing much is happening, I might shorten the time. First come first serve, who's going to land the first blow? Let the battles begin!
 
Allright before I even write up a verse, I just wanna say good luck to Smitty.

Hope this battle's a classic.
 
Battle? I'll manhandle~and~dismantle you from different angles
Entangle you; leave you seein 50 stars since you from the land of the star~spangled//
what you saw so far wasn't even half of my skill~set
I'mma exhaust you with my rhymes until you begin to spill~sweat
Beware, I ain't no weak rapper, you're facin an ill~threat
I'm just toyin with the prey, I ain't even gone for the kill~yet//
dont take this **** too lightly, Smitty, take it personal
cause you're gettin ruptured by only HALF of my arsenal//
your skills are at a minimal, your disses aint effective
you replyin is as useless as condoms that're defective//
So here's my battle~rap, I'm sure you can't handle~that
The luck you used to get this far is meltin like a candle~wax//
I'mma strangle~you~next, you tryin to tangle~a~vet,
You couldn't grab this win from me even if I was dangling~it//
In this rap game, your position is just fetal;
I'll leave JBB battle~readers fascinated like America with the Beatles//
You ain't elite, luckily sneaked-in to break the final~four
My verse will detach your anatomy and seperate your spinal~cord//
I'm like the sky, you'll attempt to reach me but always try~and~fall,
Forget a rebuttal, you're better off not replyin~at~all//
 
Before I start my verse, good luck Junoon.

It's not about luck, I just got skills like that//Since he's callin me out, I'm gonna go hard on this cat
Believe it kid, I am a lyrical indivual//It'll a be miracle if your mental status isn't crictical
You ain't that real, you sound like a fraud//I'll sex ya broad then have you stand next to God
You won't strangle me, I'll throw hooks at your cranium//Have you fallin in pieces like the old Vet Stadium
When it comes to this rap sh*t, Junoon knows jack sh*t//If I get in his face, Junnon won't do JACK SH*T
My skills are far above minimal, yeah you get the gist//My bars left you shakin like Cassius' fist
People can't touch me, my bullets rain on em//Treatin your chicks like tracks, and run a train on em
Admit it kid, I'm cuttin deep in your soul, makin you swoll//Throwin bombs at your chest, leavin a hole
I'm not even mad, you better be glad//Now sit and shutup, stop backtalkin your Dad
Stop actin like you really the best up in this place//Like I won't come over and crip walk all over your face
Throw in the towel homie, cuz it ain't lookin too good//Cuz my bars left you lookin like Ricky, in the Boyz In Da Hood
You're a side attraction, Smitty's the main feature//I treated him like Jay, and hit him with the Ether
Battlin me, it's just bad for ya health//Walk away Junoon, don't embarrass yaself
 
So far I gotta say, it's been a feasible~bout
Comparin me to Jay? Then I'll beat you without a Reasonable~Doubt//
Talkin about crip walks, actin gangster to flip~votes
When really, you're probably so girly all you can do is skip~rope//
You're runnin out of steam, gettin desperate with these lines
In fact, you spent a bar rhymin the word "sh*t" THREE times//
Who you tryin to impress with your "Dad" disses? This ain't elementary~kid
Your rhymin is full of deficiencies, you need a supplementary~kit//
Leave me critical? Let me give you a political account~and~scope
Even if you lose, you'll pull a Bush and ask to recount~the~ votes//
My rhymin is a threat~like~uranium, release the spawn~in~me *
Vet~stadium? I'll have you falling apart like the parthenons~of~Greece//
You ain't left me shakin, I'll leave you desecrated
Comaprin yourself to Cassius Clay when really, I'm the greatest//
You'll be floatin like a butterfly, I'll be stingin~like~a~bee
I'll bring Smitty~to~his~knees, you'll freeze cause I'm bringin~expertise//
You got quite some balls standin next~to~me
My verse is slowly spreadin and makin~you~weak like it was HIV//
Talkin about guns and chicks, stop stoopin~to~illusions
Your act is all a delusion, I'll bruise~you~to~contusion//
Leave you in a state of seclusion, now let me wind up my conclusion
My raps leave you feelin stabbed so much, you'll need a blood transfusion//


* Spawn is my former username.
 
Skippin rope? You gotta be kiddin Junoon//You should've just turned and walked away with a name like Junoon
Stabbin me? Boy, I dare you to try it//Like I won't make sure you need a medical supply kit
You won't make me fall apart, don't even try//I'll have your whole city burnin like Rome, makin you cry
Your flow is nice I admit, but mine is much tighter//You were better off payin THE DREAM to be ya ghostwriter
You tryin to make it personal, so i'm gonna serve you//Endanger your life, as if I was spittin the bird flu
I'll put you on lockdown like Sheldon and Lito//Have your organs look like ingredients stuffed in a burrito
You aren't the greatest, not even the best//You're about as smart as Vince Young on the Wonderlic Test
To beat you Junoon..I don't even have to mention guns and chicks in my rhyme//Because I'm versatile, like Mike in his prime
I see how you play with metaphors, so it's soundin nice//But I'm a true spitter, sucka you should bow down twice
You ain't a threat like uranium, not even chrome//I can eaisly make the brass straight shatter ya dome
To wrap it up Junoon, the 3rd chapter is done//You should go share writtens with azn and Phun
After this, your future will be shrouded in the mist//Now lets move on, so I can meet the next vicitim on the list

Hey Junoon do you wanna just end it here because I don't really feel like typin another verse after this lol. But if you wanna go another verse then I don't mind.
 
Naww man I'm done for this round as well.

Good luck Smitty and thanks for givin me a hard battle. I remember readin your first reply and thinkin that I better come back really hard if I wanna win this.

VOTE.
 
I'm voting for Junoon.

This battle really differentiated the two, IMO. Smitty, while making some great punchlines (especially in his 2nd verse), lacked the complexity and wordplay that Junoon brought. And he rhymed the same words in two consecutive raps, which I never really like.
 
After re-reading the verses, I'm going with Junoon. I thought his rebuttals were stronger and he had better punchlines. I noticed that Smitty repeated some words too. I just think that Junoon had more complex rhymes. It really was a close one though, I'd see Smitty's reply and be thinking "How's Junoon gonna beat that?", then I'd see Junoon's reply and I thought Junoon came stronger.

Good battle to you both.
 
Yet another tough call, Junoon's wordplay WAS sick and Smitty's flow was crazy. They both did well and its really hard to choose. But I thought Smitty stood out more, he surprised me because he really didn't free like this in the first 2 rounds and he just brought it this battle. Junoon had the craziest wordplay and rapped like a real pro. I'm actually gonna have to think this over.
 
I got Junoon. I was thinking about quoting some of his lines that I really liked, but then I realized that I'd end up quoting every word he typed. The difference is this battle was that every word in Junoon's raps seem to go along with everything else. All of his lines really flow together. Smitty isn't that consistent. He comes up with some really good lines, but then fills in the lines in between with subpar material. Junoon also does a better job than Smitty of dismantling his opponent.
 
I'm going to go with Junoon. There were times where Smitty rhymed the same word two to three times and Junoon was just flat out sick. I hope you win Junoon so I can say I lost to the champ.
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Although Smitty gave me a shout out...lol, I have to go with Junoon...his punches and wordplay were harder.
 
<font color=""Red"">The voting is over. Props to Smitty making it this far, but Junoon wins 5-0.</font>
 

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