Spanish Speakers!!

[Legacy]

Can someone check this out for me and proofread it please:

En El Simpsons, Marge consigue raptado por un hombre. El hombre cae adoro con ella y la rapto con sus otros amigos. Todos llegan a ser amigos realmente buenos, pero Homeros la quieren atrás. Homero pasa un viaje a encontrarlos. Homero tiene que luchar al hombre para tratar y conseguir espalda de Marge. Al fin, Marge dice al hombre que ella adora a Homero, así que Homero y Marge los salen y rechazan en casa. La partida de al otro hombre, angustioso.

(In The Simpsons, Marge gets kidnapped by a man. The man falls in love with her and kidnaps her with his other friends. They all become really good friends, but Homer wants her back. Homer goes on a trip to find them. Homer has to fight the man to try and get Marge back. In the end, Marge tells the man that she loves Homer, so Homer and Marge leave them and drive back home. Leaving the other man, heartbroken.)

 

[Master Shake]

When you translate that passage in to English, it sounds like a 6 year old wrote it lol.

 

[Legacy]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Master Shake @ Mar 15 2008, 05:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>When you translate that passage in to English, it sounds like a 6 year old wrote it lol.</div>
Haha, I don't care. This is Spanish class, not English. As long as the Spanish doesn't look like it's written by a 6 year old.

 

[Master Shake]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Legacy @ Mar 15 2008, 06:54 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Master Shake @ Mar 15 2008, 05:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>When you translate that passage in to English, it sounds like a 6 year old wrote it lol.</div>
Haha, I don't care. This is Spanish class, not English. As long as the Spanish doesn't look like it's written by a 6 year old.

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Well, I'm no Spanish expert, but if it translates to something that sounds like that, maybe it should be fixed. I don't know, you can leave it, doesn't really matter.

 

[Legacy]

I don't really care, you only grades on the words and grammar and other crap like that.

Can anyone here help me?

 

[Legacy]

Anyone here speak Spanish? I think some Hawks fan helped me last time I needed Spanish help.

 

[Brand New]

you need to correct it or what?

 

[Brand New]

En Los Simpsons, Marge es raptado por un hombre. El hombre cae adoro con ella y la rapto con sus otros amigos. Todos llegan a ser amigos realmente buenos, pero Homeros la quiere patrás. Homero pasa un viaje a encontrarlos. Homero tiene que luchar al hombre para tratar y conseguir espalda de Marge. Al fin, Marge dice al hombre que ella adora a Homero, así que Homero y Marge los salen y regrezan a casa. La partida de al otro hombre, angustioso.

why you use adora or adoro?


El hombre se enamoro con ella y la rapto con sus otros amigos.

this sounds better imo

 

[Legacy]

Is that a corrected version?

 

[Brand New]

your paragraph is confusing who wrote it?

 

[Legacy]

The Spanish translation website. I know they do it crappy and my teacher would know which is why I need a Spanish speaker to help me and proofread it.

 

[Legacy]

Some one proofread this please. It's due tomorrow.

 

[huevonkiller]

This sounds better:

En Los Simpsons, un hombre se enamoro con Marge y la rapto con sus otros amigos; despues, todos llegan a ser bien amable. Al mismo tiempo, Homeros todavia quiere que ella regresa a el y pasa en un viaje a encontrarla. El tiene que luchar con el hombre para tratar de conseguir Marge otra vez pero al fin, Marge dice al hombre que ella adora a Homero y regrezan a su casa. Dejan el corazon del otro hombre destruido.

<u>Edit- 3:39 pm</u> make sure you look at it again since I made more corrections.

 

[Legacy]

Thanks a ton man.

 

[huevonkiller]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Legacy @ Mar 16 2008, 03:37 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Thanks a ton man.

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BTW, I made one more correction to make this close to perfect:

Al mismo tiempo, Homeros todavia quiere que ella regresa a el <u>y</u> pasa en un viaje a encontrarla.



Forgot the "y" in that sentence, refer to my previous post.

 

[Legacy]

Looks like you really know your Spanish. Are you Mexican or Puerto Rican?

Edit: When I go to the Spanish to English translation it seems weird, but then again, translation websites don't work too well.

 

[huevonkiller]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Legacy @ Mar 16 2008, 03:54 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Looks like you really know your Spanish. Are you Mexican or Puerto Rican?</div>

Thankfully not.