Tracy McGrady

[Zards]

Tracy McGrady, Magic flashback. CNC would be appreciated.

 

[irob]

BG needs a loooot of work. Same with text. The main render is a little blury aswell.

 

[Delonte4Prez]

thats yucky.......text sticks out way too much, and I'm not loving the render of his neck up.coloring and effects ALL need work too.

 

[MaRdYC26]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Delonte4Prez @ Jul 9 2007, 04:28 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>thats yucky.......text sticks out way too much, and I'm not loving the render of his neck up.coloring and effects ALL need work too.</div>speak for yourself...you have no right in being that harsh on him.This isn't that bad man. You have the basic concept down of trying to be creative, now all you gotta do is check out some tutorials to see what can help you make it flow. for some new ideas check out www.good-tutorials.com

 

[Delonte4Prez]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (MaRdYC26 @ Jul 9 2007, 07:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>speak for yourself...you have no right in being that harsh on him.This isn't that bad man. You have the basic concept down of trying to be creative, now all you gotta do is check out some tutorials to see what can help you make it flow. for some new ideas check out www.good-tutorials.com</div>hey now, im not the one saying you need to use tuts.Anyway, I thought you were supposed to give criticisms to peoples work so they could get better??I coloring in the sig is solid, just the text is awful and the render just looks weird to me, thats all.....EDIT: and BTW zards that render in the bg is pretty cool, just really the text needs work, and maybe resize the front render, thats all. If I was too harsh I'm sorry

 

[Zards]

Nah, lol, you weren't harsh at all.. it's cool, I take it as helpful criticsm.

 

[l?ckdown]

There's nothing wrong with looking at tutorials. Most of everyone has used them at one point or another. As for the sig, I guess fix the text, and sharpen up Mcgrady a bit, and add some lighting on him