This is definitely an improvement from you Randy Moss wall, but it still needs some work. The BG is way to plain, get some better brushes from Deviant Art, it will beinfit you a lot. Your fonts look good, you just need better placement, and to bring it out some, it's hard to see. Add some effects to it, mess around, that's the best way to learn. Your cropping is improving, you just need to touch it up, it's better though.