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<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Your opinion no longer has any value.</div>

Guess you can't ask me to vote on any of your battles then
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<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">You really haven't battled sense the first tourney, are you ever going to come back out of retirement?</div>

I never really "retired"...we even did a verse together, although it was only one. But no, I don't really plan to rap anymore. Honestly, too much **** is going on, and I don't feel like sitting and trying to think of creative rhymes to impress you guys. Make of that whatever you want.

*waits for "I'mma make you quit like Karma" type lines in the upcoming tourney* lol

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Karma is dead to us (j/k, your possible return is like the Detox of the JBB hip hop forum).
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There will be no return, I'll drop by and vote whenever I can though.

Good luck guys.
 
Me and Umair will respond either tomorrow or Monday.
 
I will be posting my hot verse tommorow with MrJ's.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Karma Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Guess you can't ask me to vote on any of your battles then
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I never really "retired"...we even did a verse together, although it was only one. But no, I don't really plan to rap anymore. Honestly, too much **** is going on, and I don't feel like sitting and trying to think of creative rhymes to impress you guys. Make of that whatever you want.

*waits for "I'mma make you quit like Karma" type lines in the upcoming tourney* lol



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There will be no return, I'll drop by and vote whenever I can though.

Good luck guys.</div>
Good run, you'll be in the JBB MC HOF since you got that first chip. Enjoy retired life...
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Venotorious is currently working on the debut, it should be up soon.
 
Venotorious is droppin The Debut, once AF finishs with his Phone calls
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My bad, we got yall though, I don't want our verse rushed either.
 
Me and Umair got the first verse up. What y'all think?
 
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Might as well call me Antonio the way this MC Dices his opponent</div>
That was clean.

Notorious and I are cooking up something fresh, it'll be up by tonight.
 
Im feeling real creative today so expect some hard shots next time me and Ray post.
 
Carter's improved. LMFAO at Umair saying worser in one of his lines.
 
Lol, i doubt he improved, just Chutney helped him with lines.
 
How do you guys like my verse. No help or nothing.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Umair Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">How do you guys like my verse. No help or nothing.</div>

I can kinda tell, you mispelt/had bad grammar on almost everything
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<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">5...4...3...2...1 you're about get your ass beat
Ya boy Umair coming through so get up of your feet
J_Ray talking like he's the **** yet his record is worser than mine
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Wow, yall look at the little detail that don't matter. I am talking about the overall.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Umair Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Wow, yall look at the little detail that don't matter. I am talking about the overall.</div>

It was ok, just those little details mess up the flow, and make it choppy to read.
 
I couldn't find another word to put in their for "worser" and on that "of" it was a typing mistake..
 
You could have just said your record is worse than mine.

Doesn't matter - it's a wrap regardless.
 
<div class="quote_poster">MrJ Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">

Doesn't matter - it's a wrap regardless.</div>

Yall gunna throw a bow on it for us?
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We'd appreciate it.
 
If its a wrap, throw a bow on it.
And if AF ever replys to anything, then the verse should be up tonight
 
(sorry for the double post, i just have to inform)
The long awaited Debut, of Venotorious is finally here.
 
Pretty nice verse by both. Notorious caught me by surprise, but you ended your verse off weak.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Epidemik Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Pretty nice verse by both. Notorious caught me by surprise, but you ended your verse off weak.</div>

I did? At least i didnt use worser.
 
Got some hot stuff off the press comin' out......
 
<div class="quote_poster">Notorious Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Lol, i doubt he improved, just Chutney helped him with lines.</div>

I wrote my own lines. Chutney just fixed the spacing to flow better with his.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Carter Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">I wrote my own lines. Chutney just fixed the spacing to flow better with his.</div>

Ok, i was joking BTW
 
What yall think of our second verse? I'm trying to focus more on keeping a good flow this time around, since that was my main problem last competition, but still getting some good shots in when it comes to punch lines.
 
Yeah guys, tell us whatcha think of our rhymes
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<div class="quote_poster">Blur Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">What yall think of our second verse? I'm trying to focus more on keeping a good flow this time around, since that was my main problem last competition, but still getting some good shots in when it comes to punch lines.</div>

Pretty good, but something that helps with flow is line length consistency. Try to keep all of your lines at about the same length.
BTW, what do yall think of The Venotorious Debut
 
lol @ y'all using the no scrubs on me because I was listening to TLC.

It was pretty creative.
 
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