Ok, I'm gonna vote on this as I read along the thread and judge you guys on each of the verses and I'll say who I thought had the better verse and tally it up at the end to determine the winner. Since I am judging this in-depth, I will be expectedly harsh at times so don't take what I say personally. I wanted to make the voting fair for Air Fresh because I unfairly voted based on one verse last time.
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Verse 1: </u>
Vote for Air Fresh, it was a nice rebuttal. Azn's rhymes were too simplistic at times and Air Fresh easily won the first verse.
Vote: AF
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Verse 2: </u>
- not feelin the repeated mom disses from azn_iverson or the rebuttal mom disses from Air Fresh either
Azn:
"even if you were with my mom i cant imagine you ready to spoon
unable to find a condom that fit so you used a waterballoon"
That's a strange line. I don't think you should say "even if you were with my mom" at any point in a freestyle battle. The objective is to rebuttal, you can't accept his disses and then try to switch it up on him.
Air Fresh:
and just cause you mini me, dont mean I wont whoop ya
no homo but Ill put that belt to ya
I dont really have much else to say
keep ya head up son tommorow is a new day
Those lines are too generic I think.
No lines really stood out from either verse.
Vote: Tie
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Verse 3:</u>
Azn:
damn you sprayed my mom, why you gotta spread the disease,
im just lucky shes okay and doesnt have your herpes.
Again, that's a no-no.
your dissin' is a no-no, your delivery is just so-so
your two homosexual dads look like fat joe and eric snow
The punchline is pretty weak.
its okay to be embaressed, you know my spittin is dope
if you pulled down your pants to check your penis, you'd need a microscope
That line actually made me laugh, so points for that.
AF:
I'ma put you to shame, its over now
I got dudes on JBB readin this like "wow"
you aint nothin but a clown, Im sorry
and you saw us on Maury!
then I guess you cant take me to court
Lines are wayyyy too generic.
Vote: Azn
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Verse 4</u>
Azn:
how can you say you havnt seen it, that movie is yours.
as a matter of fact, i checked and you were one of the directors.
Weak line. Doesn't make much sense.
Felt the whole verse was weak. None of the personals really hit hard and were generic.
AF:
Generic lines everywhere in this verse as well but I thought your verse made a little more sense then Azn's. Some of his lines were kinda strange.
Vote: AF
<u>Verse 5</u>
- AF you did two straight verses, I'm not counting your 2nd one.
Azn:
what are you shakin? are you breakin'? my head is now achin'
cuz im scared if your invisible, you must be gay like clay aiken.
I don't really get that line.
its sad, cuz if you were my daddy, you'd be beat by your own son
That's kinda dissing yourself...
don't worry when you lose, people will congratulate your loss right after,
yea, thank god i survived a round with you, without dying of laughter.
That was a nice ending.
Your flow was good but your rhymes were too generic.
AF:
ALOTTTTTTTT of generic lines as well but I felt you had a nicer flow.
Vote: AF
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Okayy, I don't wanna read the other verses cause some of them are wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too long (and there's line 6 long verses), so I'm makin the vote based o nthe 5 I have read so far.
Tallying up the votes for each verse, the final score isss.....
Azn: 1
Air Fresh: 3
Plus one verse that was tied between both of you.
Reveiwing the verses in detail, the winner is
Air Fresh. I didn't change my vote just because he challenged my decision...I re-read the thread cause I kind of generalized and voted before.
Good battle tho and sorry for calling out a lot of your lines, but I felt I had to in order to pick a clear cut winner.
Having said that, never again will I write an essay for a JBB rap battle vote (unless it's for the Finals lol)
