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[lotza]

 

[Agent Zero]

Too dull / not shiny enough. But you are getting better.

 

[lotza]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (The Punisher @ Feb 3 2007, 06:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Too dull / not shiny enough. But you are getting better.</div>what should i do?

 

[AdropOFvenom]

Idk, like it seems like a pretty good start, but theres nothing there that 'wows' you. I'd keep working with it.

 

[Agent Zero]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (lotza @ Feb 3 2007, 06:37 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (The Punisher @ Feb 3 2007, 06:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Too dull / not shiny enough. But you are getting better.</div>what should i do?</div>Something like this:Yours

Mine

 

[Capt. Comeback]

lol... and also, I'd fix the text.