Derek Jeter

[Vicktimized7]

I've been practicing for some time now, I wanna see where I'm at. I think this is the best one I've made. Please rate 1-10, all comments and criticism are appreciated.

 

[mrm]

erase the stuff over the render, move it up some also, change up the text.

 

[Quicksand7]

You've got along way to go, erase the stuff over the face.