First Wall Ever

[P.A.P.]

Go easy, since its my first.

 

[Trip]

I'm feeling it. Good pic selection and text. One thing I would like to see is less of that blue tint in the main pic. It makes the whole wall look a bit too dark.

 

[N4S]

Banks, that's tight as hell for a 1st. It looks like you really know what your doing. Keep up the gook work.

 

[P.A.P.]

Thanks for the comments...keep them coming...

Trip: I didn't really notice the blue tint on the jersey until I did all the effects to the pic. I'll change it if I can.

 

[twool913]

This is pretty good for your first, one thing that i would change is maybe the placement of the picture. Its facing towards the right and its on the right side, it kinda looks weird like that. But with that said, i think the textwork is good for a first wall, and the b/g is pretty nice, you're off to a really good start. Good job!

 

[TimFlem]

This is nice for your first wall. The pic needs to be placed on the left and relighted, the blue tint and contrast just don't mix, also it's bad qulity. The images in the b/g need to be brought out more if you're going to put them back there,text is nice but could use a better font selection,good job for your first though.

 

[Sir Desmond]

^ I disagree, the pic is fine on the right as he is leaning into the centre of the wall, it would look weird on the left. Other than the tint on the pic, which I believe should be red, that's a great effort first up. I like the font you've used, but the text lacks something - maybe some line work?

 

[P.A.P.]

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