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[joemagoo362]

CnC please.

 

[KCX]

its one of your better ones. I would add more lighting on the render and then the left side background could use alittle more detail

 

[joemagoo362]

v2

I added more contrast and a few more details to the backround. Is it any better?

 

[KCX]

the right side was fine before and the contrast was fine. what you should trying doing is take a white soft round brush with a decent size that almost covers the head.. make a dot at the top of the helmit- glaussion blur it- then set it to color dodge. that would give the render enough lighting imo.

 

[joemagoo362]

That's with the lighting technique you advised.BTW KCX thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it.

 

[ReppinTheD]

I like v.3 the best - but I thought the biggest problem for you was the text - I like how you tried to be creative - but the Irons text doesn't look good skewed. The color isnt that good either.I think u should redo the text totally with a new font/colors.Other than that - the sig is maybe one of your best.

 

[joemagoo362]

do you have any specific font reccommendations?

 

[KCX]

font is a hard thing to judge. not many people can get it down perfectly but the best way is to just keep testing them out. I cant really help out too much with text because im not good at it.

 

[joemagoo362]

I know what you mean. I'm awful with text.

 

[Opal]

The text needs to blend in more, only thing I see that is bad. Decent sig, you are getting better though.

 

[joemagoo362]

Thanks camby!