Jason Terry (56K Killer)

[TimFlem]

 

[N4S]

I know you probably don't care but I give it 6/10.

- Because not really sure what your trying to do here with the Hawk symbol is sideways so I guess your trying to make him look like a hawk.

- The picture is cartoony looking and I think a regular photo would have been better.

- Font could have been placed in a different place with a different font and size.

- And last but not least, working him in a Mavs uni would have been real creativity.

Not your best. Criticism is good right?

 

[Courtking]

It's not one of your best backgrounds...I give it a 6.8/10...

I agree with pgrudo00 that the Hawks symbol has really nothing to do with it and looks completely random in the picture...Also he is on the Mavs now...

 

[TnNeG]

7/10 agree truly not one of your best.

 

[TimFlem]

Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Didn't know he was on the mavs but it really doesn't matter becuase now i can make it into a memory wall or something. Hmm i don't see how the pic looks cartoony but I'll work on it some. The hawks logo flipped like that is made so that he has their wings and he's going upward so I got the idea of putting the wings thier so it'll be like he was flying. Thanks for your comments i really appreciate ate them becuase when you point things out like pgrudoo did it really helps me get better. BTW the b/g isn't the main focus in any of my walls. It's the main pic.
EDIT
changed it up some

 

[TnNeG]

It looks nicer now i don't see how it looked cartoonish but... i'd give it a 9/10

 

[Courtking]

The 2nd wing makes it look a lot better but still not one of your best stuff...I am a big fan of your work and this really isn't some of your best stuff...I think when people say it looks cartoonish meaning that there is like too much brightness to the picture...

 

[S.Livingston14]

I'm feelin this backround. I really like the simplicity of it.I am going to have to give this one a 8.5/10. I'm liking it.

 

[TimFlem]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Courtking031:</div><div class="quote_post">The 2nd wing makes it look a lot better but still not one of your best stuff...I am a big fan of your work and this really isn't some of your best stuff...I think when people say it looks cartoonish meaning that there is like too much brightness to the picture...</div>
Then what is?

 

[Courtking]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting TimFlem:</div><div class="quote_post">Then what is?</div>

Well your Amare one IMO is better then this one, the Finley one, and the Troy Hudson one...With the second wing i give it a 7.5/10...

 

[eginobili20]

dont like the wings, sorry

text and everything elses cool tho. would be glad if youd change the black background. 8/10

 

[Smoke]

the only problem i see with the sig is the fact that you could have used a better pic or blurred terry alil bit.

i like the idea of the yellow stuff with the pics bleneded.

the wings also wasa pretty ccol concept.

 

[TimFlem]

Here's a brighter version for those who couldn't see the b/g also fixed a couple of things

 

[KBC]

I like it, but it isn't that great. I know how you tried to add the wings onto his body and make it look like he had wings and stuff, but I don't like how it turned out. You probably should've had a pic of him going toward the camera like for a dunk or lay-up, but not from the top view. Plus the way his body is angled just makes it look so fake. I think you should've made the font a little bigger also. The bg is alright. I give it a 7/10

 

[eginobili20]

which font did you use?

 

[TimFlem]

For the current one I used eurostar and i had some italic font on there before I changed it.

 

[TnNeG]

Dime you fixed up the b/g and made it look nicer.