Michael Clayton

[nuMbA wuN]

 

[NFLCChosen One]

I like the simplicity of this, but I don't really like the text at all. It's too blended, and kind of hard to read. Fix that up, and it will look a lot better. The font looks good, but just try some different text ideas all togeather. The BG is ok too, works alright in this case. There are also some cropping errors, it needs a little touching up in some areas.

 

[VintageNYK]

Yeah the text blended in so much doesn't look good...but its still a good wall.