MrJ vs. A.F. Venom
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Is this for the tourney?
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<div class="quote_poster">Skillz Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Is this for the tourney?</div>
Nah.
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Go ahead and start it off.</div>
I dunno if I can do something today. Maybe tommorow - got a Regents to study for.
Oh and 3 verses each, y'know the same as the tourney.
Nah.
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Go ahead and start it off.</div>
I dunno if I can do something today. Maybe tommorow - got a Regents to study for.
Oh and 3 verses each, y'know the same as the tourney.
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Get at least 1 verse in 2day J. Im bored as fudge.
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Ladies and gentleman, you are now about to witness
A one-sided slaughtering so vicious and malicious
But this is MrJ we?re talking about, can we be surprised?
Anyway, for your own safety, viewer discretion advised:
His ass is gassed when his only supporters are Brian~and~Smitty
It?s shameful that your name?s bull, so stop lyin?~you?re~shitty
Like Edvard Munch, my masterpieces will have A.F. doing the scream
He?s like The Game, the only way he can see Master J, is in his ?Dreams?
Yes, he?s the same dumb ass that will put the Jaguars as his favorite team
Or GZA as his favorite player, but did it occur to him that this is a basketball forum
Just listened to Blueprint a week ago, tried to Takeover but I have an Ether for him
You don?t spit venom, but we didn?t dispel the first initials though
The only way they can be true is if the A.F. stands for Artificial Flow
Over here see, I?m premier B, so clearly between us I?m the official pro
I?m cruising while you losing, therefore giving up is beneficial so?
Do yourself a favor and savor your last moments
You trying to test the best, but that?s a bad omen
Just know you can?t touch me, trust me, it?s so easy to cut B
It?s not the summer, but I?ll slice this fruit cake like Chutney
A one-sided slaughtering so vicious and malicious
But this is MrJ we?re talking about, can we be surprised?
Anyway, for your own safety, viewer discretion advised:
His ass is gassed when his only supporters are Brian~and~Smitty
It?s shameful that your name?s bull, so stop lyin?~you?re~shitty
Like Edvard Munch, my masterpieces will have A.F. doing the scream
He?s like The Game, the only way he can see Master J, is in his ?Dreams?
Yes, he?s the same dumb ass that will put the Jaguars as his favorite team
Or GZA as his favorite player, but did it occur to him that this is a basketball forum
Just listened to Blueprint a week ago, tried to Takeover but I have an Ether for him
You don?t spit venom, but we didn?t dispel the first initials though
The only way they can be true is if the A.F. stands for Artificial Flow
Over here see, I?m premier B, so clearly between us I?m the official pro
I?m cruising while you losing, therefore giving up is beneficial so?
Do yourself a favor and savor your last moments
You trying to test the best, but that?s a bad omen
Just know you can?t touch me, trust me, it?s so easy to cut B
It?s not the summer, but I?ll slice this fruit cake like Chutney
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The Undertakers Story
Why did you start with me/ Now ya garbage ass is about to be faded//
and I've talked to Dream/ He agreed to add you to "MC's that are overrated"//
See, I don’t even spit flames, dudes/ I speak fumes//
Messing with me fool/just get ready your tomb//
And once you got ya tomb, go ahead and rev up the hearse//
Cause I Kill with my rhymes, and ya Stone will contain my verse//
Your career could have been salvaged, if you just would have fled//
But you attempted to be a hero, so your 6 feet under instead//
It’s an ugly outcome when you wanna run ya mouth like Sheed//
So this is what the gravestone above your broken body will read:
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Here lies Mrs. J, his bones and his Flesh
Sadly his life was taken; lyrically executed by Fresh
It didn’t have to happen this way, the battle could have took Cease
Instead Mrs tried to fight anyway, now may his soul Rest In Peace
Mrs. J wasn’t a bad dude, he could spit a little something ‘alright’
But it’s obvious what happens, if you underestimate AF’s might
Now the few of J's friends, family, and fans are left morning
So if anybody else wants some of A.F.-V: let this be ya warning</div>
Why did you start with me/ Now ya garbage ass is about to be faded//
and I've talked to Dream/ He agreed to add you to "MC's that are overrated"//
See, I don’t even spit flames, dudes/ I speak fumes//
Messing with me fool/just get ready your tomb//
And once you got ya tomb, go ahead and rev up the hearse//
Cause I Kill with my rhymes, and ya Stone will contain my verse//
Your career could have been salvaged, if you just would have fled//
But you attempted to be a hero, so your 6 feet under instead//
It’s an ugly outcome when you wanna run ya mouth like Sheed//
So this is what the gravestone above your broken body will read:
<div align="center">
Here lies Mrs. J, his bones and his Flesh
Sadly his life was taken; lyrically executed by Fresh
It didn’t have to happen this way, the battle could have took Cease
Instead Mrs tried to fight anyway, now may his soul Rest In Peace
Mrs. J wasn’t a bad dude, he could spit a little something ‘alright’
But it’s obvious what happens, if you underestimate AF’s might
Now the few of J's friends, family, and fans are left morning
So if anybody else wants some of A.F.-V: let this be ya warning</div>
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There ain’t no question this rap game is like my profession
Since “college” isn’t helping, I’ll give you a rap philosophical session:
<u>Your Flow:</u>
Nothing close to a pro; this battle you should forego
Not even an amber alert can find this kid’s flow
I flow nastier than diarrhea, so beating me is ASSinine
It’s effortless when I rhyme, I just do it to pass the time
But just like a constipated baby, despite trying so hard, your sh!t is always soft
Thought I was in a coffin, but I’m out the tomb like I was raided by Lara Croft
And the reason why I say that I’m better is because it’s true
It’s like I’m from Detroit the way my verse Piss tons on you
<u>Lesson:</u>
There is absolutely no proximity between our creativity
These bars exclusivity make him feel like he’s in captivity
I have a proclivity for spitting fire in this rhyming activity
Despite his negativity, he won’t experience progressivity
Daddy exhibits insensitivity so this thread has no festivities
This flow’s best, so my grotesque slaughter is reaching productivity
I have a rapping affinity, and I flow with divinity
Trying to beat MrJ? You have a better chance counting to infinity
Actually, Air Femininity has a better chance losing his virginity
My creativity shocks the fans like my flow has electricity
Me just spitting this toxicity I’m giving you publicity
So if you don’t fall back then you have to beg for repentance
Because my raps get more I’s (eyes) than a Umair sentence
Regardless of the circumstances, I am always gonna get mines
But you couldn’t grasp the concept if you read between the lines:
A. l F. l Vagina, l put l the l mic l down, l you l suck l
Murking these pseudo-intellects like my name was Chuck
<u>Copyright Infringement:</u>
I used R.I.P. against Chutney and against J_Ray titled my verse
Now he’s trying to be like Michael the way he Jack son’s work
This clown was down on ideas so he stole, since his tank was empty
You’re DREAM-ing if you say I’m overrated—I’m rated over MC’s!
With this final verse I’m putting the lid~on his~tomb
I’m hanging this Fresh poster like a kid~in his~room
I’ll stay on top of this battle and ahead of you hundreds of miles
Let’s see you try to counter my verse without biting my style
Thought you had me done, but it’s like lightning when I strike
This dyke finally realized it’s impossible to stop Mike on the mic
Since “college” isn’t helping, I’ll give you a rap philosophical session:
<u>Your Flow:</u>
Nothing close to a pro; this battle you should forego
Not even an amber alert can find this kid’s flow
I flow nastier than diarrhea, so beating me is ASSinine
It’s effortless when I rhyme, I just do it to pass the time
But just like a constipated baby, despite trying so hard, your sh!t is always soft
Thought I was in a coffin, but I’m out the tomb like I was raided by Lara Croft
And the reason why I say that I’m better is because it’s true
It’s like I’m from Detroit the way my verse Piss tons on you
<u>Lesson:</u>
There is absolutely no proximity between our creativity
These bars exclusivity make him feel like he’s in captivity
I have a proclivity for spitting fire in this rhyming activity
Despite his negativity, he won’t experience progressivity
Daddy exhibits insensitivity so this thread has no festivities
This flow’s best, so my grotesque slaughter is reaching productivity
I have a rapping affinity, and I flow with divinity
Trying to beat MrJ? You have a better chance counting to infinity
Actually, Air Femininity has a better chance losing his virginity
My creativity shocks the fans like my flow has electricity
Me just spitting this toxicity I’m giving you publicity
So if you don’t fall back then you have to beg for repentance
Because my raps get more I’s (eyes) than a Umair sentence
Regardless of the circumstances, I am always gonna get mines
But you couldn’t grasp the concept if you read between the lines:
A. l F. l Vagina, l put l the l mic l down, l you l suck l
Murking these pseudo-intellects like my name was Chuck
<u>Copyright Infringement:</u>
I used R.I.P. against Chutney and against J_Ray titled my verse
Now he’s trying to be like Michael the way he Jack son’s work
This clown was down on ideas so he stole, since his tank was empty
You’re DREAM-ing if you say I’m overrated—I’m rated over MC’s!
With this final verse I’m putting the lid~on his~tomb
I’m hanging this Fresh poster like a kid~in his~room
I’ll stay on top of this battle and ahead of you hundreds of miles
Let’s see you try to counter my verse without biting my style
Thought you had me done, but it’s like lightning when I strike
This dyke finally realized it’s impossible to stop Mike on the mic
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The MC Medical Demonstration
Fall back f**er, you?d be better off if you tried to watch me and mimic//
Now I?ma show everybody the difference between a real verse and a GIMICK//
First I?ll wash the blood off my palms, and then begin the medical expedition//
So all you JBB rappers take out ya notes, as I lyrically dissect my opposition//
Bar for bar its no match, I got too many killa quotes//
We?ll start this off by examining this little b!tches throat//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">
Nothing close to a pro; this battle you should forego
Not even an amber alert can find this kid?s flow:</div>
Realize what Mr. J really recommends/ and understand what he actually means//
That I?m not a pro- more like a LEGEND/ and my flow cannot ever BE SEEN//
By now yall should know first hand, I?m Notorious for lyrical plague//
It?s like an Epidemik, when I battle, the toxication is sprayed//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">I flow nastier than diarrhea, so beating me is ASSinine
It?s effortless when I rhyme, I just do it to pass the time</div>
Pay attention to his first line, he just proved that he can?t F with-me//
Cause he made one of my points, his flow is garbage cause its SH!TTY//
J, I?m ten times stronger, so there is really no reason to even fight you//
Somewhere you f?d up: battling me Karma came back to bite you//
Now we?re moving along, lets analyze the logic of this fool?s brain//
Closely watch how Mr. J?s mistakes are going to result in Major Pain: //
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">There is absolutely no proximity between our creativity
These bars exclusivity make him feel like he?s in captivity
I have a proclivity for spitting fire in this rhyming activity
Despite his negativity, he won?t experience progressivity
Daddy exhibits insensitivity so this thread has no festivities
This flow?s best, so my grotesque slaughter is reaching productivity
I have a rapping affinity, and I flow with divinity
Trying to beat MrJ? You have a better chance counting to infinity
Actually, Air Femininity has a better chance losing his virginity
My creativity shocks the fans like my flow has electricity
Me just spitting this toxicity I?m giving you publicity </div>
I admit, at first glance this might LOOK like a nice verse//
But as I looked a second time, I noticed Mr. J?s gotten worse//
A bunch of bland punches at first, masked by some fancy words//
Check his last two rounds its NOTHING we haven?t seen or heard//
You got a new acronym for A.F? Man that ish is getting played//
And I beat up 3 pussies in 06?, my lethal lyrics have been LAYED//
We?ve seen everything from played words, and corny proclamations//
Now we?ll prosecute the lines behind all of these FALSE accusations//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">This clown was down on ideas so he stole, since his tank was empty
You?re DREAM-ing if you say I?m overrated?I?m rated over MC?s!</div>
You rated over a couple of losers, but rated UNDER a lot of other- MC?s://
That includes: Karma, Chutney, Swish, Smitty, Iggy, and another- ME//
I?m down on ideas? Homeboy your just shooting up lame blanks//
Even if I did steal yours, then I took them to a whole other rank//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">With this final verse I?m putting the lid~on his~tomb
I?m hanging this Fresh poster like a kid~in his~room</div>
Your calling me a swagger jacker? Now exactly who the F are you? //
Everybody knows the only person that uses that symbol is Junoon//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Thought you had me done, but it?s like lightning when I strike
This dyke finally realized it?s impossible to stop Mike on the mic</div>
What everybody should realize is, that this is the lie of all lies//
I know I had you done, your access to my turf was denied//
I?m ImMortal in Kombat, because my attacks are more blunter//
So watch ya back on these boards boy, I?m JBB?s MC Hunter//
Dr. A.F. Venom: successfully surgery on the Mike, that left incisions//
So next time son, try and make some smarter rapper decisions//
I?m diagnosing you with: MC Repetivity and Dishonesty?your lips were just flappin//
Now I prescribing you with my suggestion b!tch nigg@- JUST STOP RAPPIN//
Fall back f**er, you?d be better off if you tried to watch me and mimic//
Now I?ma show everybody the difference between a real verse and a GIMICK//
First I?ll wash the blood off my palms, and then begin the medical expedition//
So all you JBB rappers take out ya notes, as I lyrically dissect my opposition//
Bar for bar its no match, I got too many killa quotes//
We?ll start this off by examining this little b!tches throat//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">
Nothing close to a pro; this battle you should forego
Not even an amber alert can find this kid?s flow:</div>
Realize what Mr. J really recommends/ and understand what he actually means//
That I?m not a pro- more like a LEGEND/ and my flow cannot ever BE SEEN//
By now yall should know first hand, I?m Notorious for lyrical plague//
It?s like an Epidemik, when I battle, the toxication is sprayed//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">I flow nastier than diarrhea, so beating me is ASSinine
It?s effortless when I rhyme, I just do it to pass the time</div>
Pay attention to his first line, he just proved that he can?t F with-me//
Cause he made one of my points, his flow is garbage cause its SH!TTY//
J, I?m ten times stronger, so there is really no reason to even fight you//
Somewhere you f?d up: battling me Karma came back to bite you//
Now we?re moving along, lets analyze the logic of this fool?s brain//
Closely watch how Mr. J?s mistakes are going to result in Major Pain: //
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">There is absolutely no proximity between our creativity
These bars exclusivity make him feel like he?s in captivity
I have a proclivity for spitting fire in this rhyming activity
Despite his negativity, he won?t experience progressivity
Daddy exhibits insensitivity so this thread has no festivities
This flow?s best, so my grotesque slaughter is reaching productivity
I have a rapping affinity, and I flow with divinity
Trying to beat MrJ? You have a better chance counting to infinity
Actually, Air Femininity has a better chance losing his virginity
My creativity shocks the fans like my flow has electricity
Me just spitting this toxicity I?m giving you publicity </div>
I admit, at first glance this might LOOK like a nice verse//
But as I looked a second time, I noticed Mr. J?s gotten worse//
A bunch of bland punches at first, masked by some fancy words//
Check his last two rounds its NOTHING we haven?t seen or heard//
You got a new acronym for A.F? Man that ish is getting played//
And I beat up 3 pussies in 06?, my lethal lyrics have been LAYED//
We?ve seen everything from played words, and corny proclamations//
Now we?ll prosecute the lines behind all of these FALSE accusations//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">This clown was down on ideas so he stole, since his tank was empty
You?re DREAM-ing if you say I?m overrated?I?m rated over MC?s!</div>
You rated over a couple of losers, but rated UNDER a lot of other- MC?s://
That includes: Karma, Chutney, Swish, Smitty, Iggy, and another- ME//
I?m down on ideas? Homeboy your just shooting up lame blanks//
Even if I did steal yours, then I took them to a whole other rank//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">With this final verse I?m putting the lid~on his~tomb
I?m hanging this Fresh poster like a kid~in his~room</div>
Your calling me a swagger jacker? Now exactly who the F are you? //
Everybody knows the only person that uses that symbol is Junoon//
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Thought you had me done, but it?s like lightning when I strike
This dyke finally realized it?s impossible to stop Mike on the mic</div>
What everybody should realize is, that this is the lie of all lies//
I know I had you done, your access to my turf was denied//
I?m ImMortal in Kombat, because my attacks are more blunter//
So watch ya back on these boards boy, I?m JBB?s MC Hunter//
Dr. A.F. Venom: successfully surgery on the Mike, that left incisions//
So next time son, try and make some smarter rapper decisions//
I?m diagnosing you with: MC Repetivity and Dishonesty?your lips were just flappin//
Now I prescribing you with my suggestion b!tch nigg@- JUST STOP RAPPIN//
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Wow, very nice battle. I think the 2nd verse from both was absolutely amazing. And thats what pretty much decided it for me. I thought AF's second was slightly better then Mr. J's, so my vote goes to
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<font size=""3"">AF Venom</font>
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Both had great, great 2nd verses, MrJ's 2nd verse is his best so far, same for A.F. I like how MrJ responded to AF's verse, and I thought MrJ pretty much had it won, but AF just picked it apart, which had me buggin. So my vote goes to...
AF Venom
AF Venom
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"And I beat up 3 pussies in 06?"
Um I know you aren't including me in that 3.
you are very transparent man.
Don't you know that constantly pumping yourself up and boosting your own ego only shows how insecure you are? "fresh city", the "freshness" venom, etc....
and pandering to voters by listing all the guys you (a guy who likes Lil Wayne) thinks is better than J? I'm on to you kid.
But my unbiased pick in this battle is you. You did well in this so I give you the nod.
Um I know you aren't including me in that 3.
you are very transparent man.
Don't you know that constantly pumping yourself up and boosting your own ego only shows how insecure you are? "fresh city", the "freshness" venom, etc....
and pandering to voters by listing all the guys you (a guy who likes Lil Wayne) thinks is better than J? I'm on to you kid.
But my unbiased pick in this battle is you. You did well in this so I give you the nod.
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<div class="quote_poster">phunDamentalz Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">"And I beat up 3 pussies in 06?"
Um I know you aren't including me in that 3.
you are very transparent man.
Don't you know that constantly pumping yourself up and boosting your own ego only shows how insecure you are? "fresh city", the "freshness" venom, etc....
and pandering to voters by listing all the guys you (a guy who likes Lil Wayne) thinks is better than J? I'm on to you kid.
But my unbiased pick in this battle is you. You did well in this so I give you the nod.</div>
I'm just having fun man, I'm not even an egotistic person, this is the internet.
But props to you for being unbiased, don't take what I say so serious, its just out of fun.
Um I know you aren't including me in that 3.
you are very transparent man.
Don't you know that constantly pumping yourself up and boosting your own ego only shows how insecure you are? "fresh city", the "freshness" venom, etc....
and pandering to voters by listing all the guys you (a guy who likes Lil Wayne) thinks is better than J? I'm on to you kid.
But my unbiased pick in this battle is you. You did well in this so I give you the nod.</div>
I'm just having fun man, I'm not even an egotistic person, this is the internet.
But props to you for being unbiased, don't take what I say so serious, its just out of fun.
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My vote goes to MrJ.
I didn't really like how he started out and initially thought A.F. was ahead. However, his 2nd verse was a killer. Not only was the concept original, but it was complex and it hit hard. He managed to call out A.F. on his last verse while insulting him with a multitude of multi's and clever wordplay. Fresh's response was great too, but he spent a lot more time countering and not enough throwing out new insults. Also, it was much longer. As a result, I felt like he didn't post a convincing enough final post.
Both of you produced a great battle, though.
(btw, A.F.'s used my Karma line. I was thinking of using something similar in the team battles).
I didn't really like how he started out and initially thought A.F. was ahead. However, his 2nd verse was a killer. Not only was the concept original, but it was complex and it hit hard. He managed to call out A.F. on his last verse while insulting him with a multitude of multi's and clever wordplay. Fresh's response was great too, but he spent a lot more time countering and not enough throwing out new insults. Also, it was much longer. As a result, I felt like he didn't post a convincing enough final post.
Both of you produced a great battle, though.
(btw, A.F.'s used my Karma line. I was thinking of using something similar in the team battles).
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<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">I think if this is the "best battle" on JBB, we should make it more than 5. Maybe 7?</div>
It's good with me.
<div class="quote_poster">MrJ Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">
Oh yeah and good battle.
</div>
You to man, definitely good ****.
Also I don't want anybody leaving this thread without voting (that means you to Aznx), lol.
It's good with me.
<div class="quote_poster">MrJ Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">
Oh yeah and good battle.
You to man, definitely good ****.
Also I don't want anybody leaving this thread without voting (that means you to Aznx), lol.
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WOW! Definately the hottest battle in JBB history! Great stuff and props to both of you!
After the first verse, I thought AF had the lead. But after the second verse I think MrJ came out on top. AF's second verse was good but I agree with Chutney when he said that AF spent a little more time defending and countering instead of attacking. Very close battle, my vote goes to MrJ just by a hair.
After the first verse, I thought AF had the lead. But after the second verse I think MrJ came out on top. AF's second verse was good but I agree with Chutney when he said that AF spent a little more time defending and countering instead of attacking. Very close battle, my vote goes to MrJ just by a hair.
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My vote goes to MrJ. I think Fresh's first verse wasnt special. He just talked about one topic and that was J's death and the tombstone. I think J's verse had stronger punches and overall a better flow. the 2nd verse these 2 guys pumped it up. I like how J used his vocab in the 2nd verse and combined it with strong punchlines. Fresh's verse was really good too but his first verse lost it for em.
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<div class="quote_poster">MrJ Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Because....?
You still have to explain the vote.</div>
Fine
Both artists (sounds cool
) had great creative verses. Both were very creative ideas but I think Mr. J just went on too long. AF's punch lines were better too IMO. All in all, I have to give the edge to A.F. Venom
You still have to explain the vote.</div>
Fine
Both artists (sounds cool
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This was by far the best battle I've ever seen at JustBBall. You guys exchanged blows and I wish it went on longer just because both of you were doing so sick. Great job to both of you.
Last night, I thought MrJ had this thing won. His second verse was sick and I didn't know how AF was going to bounce back after that one. I liked MrJ's wordplay (Piss tons and Jack sons) and it was a great verse. However, AF came back extremely strong and his second verse countered all of MrJ's disses and I felt it gave him the advantage. This battle was very close but in the end, my vote goes to Fresh.
Last night, I thought MrJ had this thing won. His second verse was sick and I didn't know how AF was going to bounce back after that one. I liked MrJ's wordplay (Piss tons and Jack sons) and it was a great verse. However, AF came back extremely strong and his second verse countered all of MrJ's disses and I felt it gave him the advantage. This battle was very close but in the end, my vote goes to Fresh.