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1st Paragraph: When Columbus accidentally found the “New World”, he decided that it was best to make assumptions and do what he wanted. His first sight of what he termed “Indians” was of a group of attractive, unclothed people. Speculation is that, to him, their nakedness represented a lack of culture, customs, and religion (Wilford 159). Columbus sees this as his chance, to do what he called “Spread the word of God”. Not taking any consideration to what the Natives have developed, he saw they could be easily exploited to do what he wanted. He believed that they would be easy to conquer because they appeared defenseless, easy to trick because they lacked experience in trade, and an easy source of profit because they could be enslaved (Fernandez-Armesto 83). He took no thought in to their language, ideals, culture or even their leaders. Their are many letters showing the arrogance of Columbus. One letter read, in so many words, “I have found many islands filled with people, and I have taken over as their highness...” Again, Columbus never stopped and thought if he could just come in to their land, take what he wanted and do what he wanted. These were not empty islands; they had Native peoples who have lived there for thousands of years only to be demeaned, destroyed and used for slave trading. All he wanted to do was create fame for himself and glorify Spain.

I could nitpick some things but it doesn't seem too bad. I think you should elaborate a little on that very last sentence though, sounds a bit simple. I wouldn't be THAT worried, this seems like a fairly easy position to defend.
 
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Shake you own these guys some money. They gave you great stuff
 
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I could nitpick some things but it doesn't seem too bad. I think you should elaborate a little on that very last sentence though, sounds a bit simple. I wouldn't be THAT worried, this seems like a fairly easy position to defend.


I disagree, considering it's a high school essay. Unless you can't think of anything else to write, move on.
 
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Send some addresses via PM and you'll get your money. 5 bucks a paragraph. So far, Денг Гордон and JCB have 5 bucks.
 
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Are you sure you want to go to J school KS?
 
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I'll use your thing JCB, as my conclusion. Is that alright?

Ha. Doesn't matter to me.

I won't be able to help you anymore though because I have a paper to write as well.
 
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Yea. I just did this quick time. I'm a better writer than this, just I got strapped for time.
 
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I disagree, considering it's a high school essay. Unless you can't think of anything else to write, move on.

High School is a joke, so I don't respect their standards. I don't even need to suggest anything anymore either, these people have it covered (and I have my own Calc 2 test tommorow). : ]
 
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Shake do you know how to use Chicago style footnotes and such? That always helps me.
 
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When Columbus arrived in this unknown land he decided to make assumptions and do as he desired. Columbus' first encounter with the group of people he called "indians", was a group of attractive, unclothed people. He speculated that their nakedness represented a lack of culture, customs, and religion. (Wilford 159) Columbus saw this as his opportunity to spread the word of God. He did not take into consideration that the natives probably had already developed their own religion. He believed that they would be easy to conquer because they appeared defenseless, easy to trick because they lacked experience in trade, and an easy source of profit because they could be enslaved. (Fenandez-Armesto 83) He did not care about the natives' language, ideals, culture, and especially their leaders. Many of Columbus' letters showed his arrogance and lack of respect for the people he encountered. One of the letters read, "I have found many islands filled with people, and I have taken over as their highness..." Columbus never cared about the well being of the people already inhabiting the islands. These were not empty islands, they were filled with people, who had lived there for thousands of years. Only an evil man would demean, destroy, and enslave these people. Columbus was only worried about his own personal glory in Spain and not about the well being of the people on the islands he had stumbled upon.
 
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With numerous counts of slavery towards Natives who have been living on that land for hundreds of years.

That's a run-on sentence.
 
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I ditched Criminal Evidence, but it is time to go to Critical Thinking through Literature. Peace, ya'll.
 
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I changed it. Thanks to everyone who helped with my essay. It's now printed and read to go.
 
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