Funny Stand up comedy

[KingSpeed]

My debut....

 

[HomerLovesKoolAid]

Great job!

 

[SlyPokerDog]

My debut....

Way to go! You did great!

Now stop with the singing, comedy and magic and get a part of the final season of Game of Thrones, dammit.

 

[bodyman5000 and 1]

My debut....

Ok. Stop with the magic and ESPECIALLY the singing and concentrate on the acting and comedy.

This was good.

 

[Denny Crane]

You need props.

Props!

 

[Orion Bailey]

My debut....

I will watch tonight. Better make me laugh!!@!!

 

[bodyman5000 and 1]

I will watch tonight. Better make me laugh!!@!!

It was good.

 

[SportsAndWhine]

Digging the Andy Kauffman, Maria Bamford-esque delivery. Definitely funny!

 

[Sheldon Shape]

Very good!

 

[riverman]

My debut....

very cool Eric!

 

[KingSpeed]

Thanks everybody!

 

[riverman]

Thanks everybody!

I gotta ask...were the notes on purpose? It worked!

 

[Chris Craig]

I got one for you

The Blazers walked out onto the basketball court...

 

[Orion Bailey]

You cans count me down for several smiles, two snorts and 4 all out laughs. Not bad for 5 minutes!!!

 

[Chris Craig]

My debut....

Fucking awesome man. Your a natural. Great set. That critic needs to leave you the fuck alone.

 

[riverman]

You need props.

Props!

Like Carrot Top props?

 

[bodyman5000 and 1]

Like Carrot Top props?
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No!

 

[bodyman5000 and 1]

You cans count me down for several smiles, two snorts and 4 all out laughs. Not bad for 5 minutes!!!

Told you.

 

[MARIS61]

Funny stuff!

 

[barfo]

Two thumbs up. Would watch again.

barfo

 

[KingSpeed]

You guys are awesome, thank you so much!

 

[KingSpeed]

I gotta ask...were the notes on purpose? It worked!

Yes, that's how it worked out organically. I think I have to stick to it now. I'm working on another five minutes!

 

[PtldPlatypus]

Yes, that's how it worked out organically. I think I have to stick to it now. I'm working on another five minutes!

If you do, I might recommend one joke per set where the punchline is split between two cards, and switching cards and finishing the line changes the joke significantly. Like:

"It was like doing cocaine and speed and making a mix-tape after having just lost your virginity..."
[switch cards]
"...to Colin Quinn"

You're the comedian, I'm sure you could execute it better than I can describe.

 

[bodyman5000 and 1]

Nah, that's not that different. He should do car related racist jokes. That's different.

 

[PtldPlatypus]

Nah, that's not that different. He should do car related racist jokes. That's different.

He doesn't want to infringe on your territory though.

 

[Sedatedfork]

Not bad! I liked the material. You seemed more comfortable at the beginning than in the end (maybe you were running short on time there?). Try to lose the cards. Awesome job though!

 

[bodyman5000 and 1]

He doesn't want to infringe on your territory though.

I'll write them for him.

 

[Sedatedfork]

Oh I see the cards are intentional for character comedy. Well then, I like it! Just got to hone that character comedy.

 

[KingSpeed]

If you do, I might recommend one joke per set where the punchline is split between two cards, and switching cards and finishing the line changes the joke significantly. Like:


You're the comedian, I'm sure you could execute it better than I can describe.

That's a great idea. I'm going to do that!

 

[trailblazer18]

That was great. I busted up laughing multiple times! I want to see more.