Stromile Swift

[TnNeG]

V1:

V2:

Comment PLZ.

 

[Mamba]

Its nice, I just hate the font... 8/10

 

[P.A.P.]

Yea the swift kills it IMO, even though I know what you're trying to do. Try to add something in that bar and change the font. Maybe put one of your crazy renders in the bg of the white part, and lower the opacity. Try easing up on the lighting too.

 

[TnNeG]

blah i liked the text

well i posted v1.

 

[P.A.P.]

First= Much better Change the Swift font though

 

[Apollo]

I like the V.1 better too. The Swift text isn`t that great and maybe you should add some more effect to the pic to make it look better. Not bad though, 8.5/10.

 

[TnNeG]

didn't change anything much but some people thought v2 on s3 would look better in black.

 

[JWohl]

not feelin it

Im sorry the font and pic ar both nice but something about the bg i just missing. I think it might be all the empty space you need more action or more pics or something you cant just leave all that space empty. For a good example of this look at Knicks Analysts bgs. He always has somethin goin on in the empty space whether it be a blend of pics or just an effect.

 

[jbbBled11Harr3]

Last version is fine with me. I like it. It's just nice and clean.