Strike3 BBW Elite Member Joined Mar 18, 2007 Messages 905 Likes 0 Points 16 Jul 16, 2007 #2 Not bad but it needs some color to it.
l?ckdown BBW Member Joined Jun 12, 2007 Messages 598 Likes 0 Points 16 Jul 16, 2007 #3 pretty neat with the drawing looking effect, just clean up the right side with something else, kinda messes with the flow a bit.
pretty neat with the drawing looking effect, just clean up the right side with something else, kinda messes with the flow a bit.
