2v2 Open Rap Battle (Air Fresh, Swish15 vs. Smitty, Chutney)

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Ok, I'm sorry guys. We'll have our verse tonight and then clean this thread up and allow people to vote.
 
<font color=""Blue"">Brining us to the knees? Folks, it looks like we got a homo up in the place
I guess that explains why Smitty comments are all from dudes on Myspace
Chutney take a second before you think, and your lips begin to flap
All the sudden I’m jealous of Baby, because I like Wayne’s raps?
You lame ass ****, that’s some corny ass rhymes you put together
Even I am disappointed that you couldn’t come up with something better
The Legion is “cartoonish”, color coding is “nonsense”, is what you proclaim
Then you compared us to Sesame, and color coded your verse, u fools did the same!
Didn’t you realize that you just contradicted yourself Chutney?
We not the Berlin Wall, more like the Wall in that Asian Country
Don’t get it twisted; because we will not be walked over
But we will stand tall; Yall witnessing the Southern Takeover
It’s always tech this, AK that, Smitty your raps have gotten worse
Get ya game up boy, stop talking about gun play in every verse
Karma dropped out, but we will not fall back despite what yall wish
All that means is your getting twice the more dopeness from me and Swish</font>
<font color=""Green"">We lost one member and you think we’re gonna dismember?
We challenged ya’ll to this battle BEFORE Karma, remember?
Karma wasn’t our star player, cuz in this game were all equal
We kicked your ass in round one now prepare for the sequel
Your lines are weak, you contradict yourself when you speak
Work on your technique while me and Fresh complete our winning streak
Ya’ll can’t even rhyme, and I’m kinda concerned
‘Sig’ and ‘Bring’ sound different, that’s stuff little first graders learned
You don’t spit sick at all and we make your brains rattle
Your weak son and you stole your flu line from my last battle
Just ask Iggy, I said the same thing first
You must really look up to me if you’re copying my verse
We already got this **** won, the voters already know it’s done
The Southern Takeover has begun, you better respect us son
I wasn’t making another sig for Iggy, he’s already got one
I was getting your sig ready cuz ya’ll just got outdone</font>

<font color=""Blue"">Air Fresh</font>
<font color=""Green"">Swish</font>
<font color=""Blue"">Southern</font> <font color=""Green"">Takeover</font>
 
Alright start voting guys.

BTW, Chutney, can you clean out all the garbage in here other than the actual verses? Thanks.
 
Air Fresh And Swish(And Kinda Karma)

They came out strong, color coded(lol) and stayed strong throughout.
Had strong rebuttals and kept the heat, till they handed Chutney, Smitty and Carter a defeat.
Didnt really like the whole "Southern Takeover" thing, sounded to Chamillionare
Also, i didnt notice until Swish brang this to my attention
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Colour-coded nonsense, it?s impossible to make sense of what y?all bring,
We waited for a rebuttal, but it looks like Swish just made Iggy another sig,</div>
Chutney, i kno you went to the finals of the tourney an all, but check your rhymes first, ok man?

No hard feelings, but i think AF and Swish pulled away with it in the end.
 
If you're talking about your first rap, then it was Chutney:

Last edited by Chutney : 11-24-2006 at 01:15 AM.

And I just went after whoever I could find something to get at. It's all good.
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<div class="quote_poster">Swish15 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">If you're talking about your first rap, then it was Chutney:

Last edited by Chutney : 11-24-2006 at 01:15 AM.

And I just went after whoever I could find something to get at. It's all good.
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</div>
That was a grammar mistake. I'm a perfectionist.
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Lol, my teachers the same way, on all my grammar papers, i mean just cause i used a dang verb tense wrong and missed half the problems, why do i got to gets an F?
 
<div class="quote_poster">Chutney Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">That was a grammar mistake. I'm a perfectionist.
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Obsessive compulsive disorder. Just kidding, I'm a perfectionist too.

Vote!
 
great battle
AF and Swish won it though imo....
try to be unbiased even though Chutney voted for me in my batle with Airfresh
they had more great lines and sounded strong throughout
like AF rhyming "Chutney" with "wall from that Asian Country" - genius
also Swish - "twenty two bars and not one yo momma joke
i guess yall silenced carter while the others ghostwrote"
 
BTW, whats ghost wrote? im sorry im a noob at this whole rap/freestyle thing
 
Someone writing your rhymes for you, while you are rapping them like they are yours.

For example: Snoop and other Death Row people wrote for Dre.
 
<div class="quote_poster">CPaulDWade#3 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">BTW, whats ghost wrote? im sorry im a noob at this whole rap/freestyle thing</div>

here's a funny example:
Pharrell from the Neptunes ghostwrote Gwen Stefani "i ain't no hollaback girl". It was probably wise he let Gwen use that track and not include it on his solo album
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<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">

Colour-coded nonsense, it?s impossible to make sense of what y?all bring,
We waited for a rebuttal, but it looks like Swish just made Iggy another sig,

Chutney, i kno you went to the finals of the tourney an all, but check your rhymes first, ok man?
</div>

Not everything has to be a dead-on nursery rhyme. There are a thousand words a certain word can rhyme with without it ending in the same way. Bring and sig may not look like they rhyme, but if you read the two lines and flow the way Chutney probably meant it to flow (and they way I'm flowing right now), it goes with it.

If every rhyme was a perfect, nursery styled rhyme, a lot of rappers wouldn't get to be as creative as they are.
 
I'm going to go with Smitty and Chutney for this one. I thought they were more consistent and stayed strong during the whole battle. Swish and AF, your first verse with Karma was really strong and I didnt know how they could come back from that. But Smitty and Chutney did come back strong themselves. I just felt when it came to the second verse Swish and AF, your verse was kind of weak compared to your last one. So based on consistency I'm going with Smitty and Chutney. Good battle nonetheless.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Smitty Wrote</div><div class="quote_post"><font color=""DarkRed"">
When there were 3 competitors on each side, your chances were legit,
But you lost your star player and we no longer have Carter to babysit,
</font>
<font color=""Navy"">AF shouldn't even be tryin’ to diss my name, man,
Sayin’ I'm sorry when he's a Lil Wayne fan,
Little Venom has some nerve messin' with me,
Like I won't, give him a lyrical knockout like Muhammad Ali,
</font>

<font color=""DarkRed"">Chutney</font>
<font color=""Navy"">Smitty</font></div>

AF and Swish did better with Junoon, but Chutney's line was true.... AF and Swish had a good chance with Junoon on their time while Chutney and Smitty had Carter holdin them back. So, I really liked that line.

And then those lines from Smitty were hot too, I like how he gets at AF for liking Lil-Wayne fan. Had Phun got AF the same way for living in FLA, he would've gotten my vote - which would've gave him the win. And I liked the "lyrical knockout like Muhammad Ali" - that was sick.

MY VOTE: Smitty and Chutney
 
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">And then those lines from Smitty were hot too, I like how he gets at AF for liking Lil-Wayne fan.</div>
Speaking of this, almost everybattle I have been in someone brings up Lil Wayne like it's really dissing me or something, imo dissing me for liking Lil Wayne is pretty weak; keep on voting anyway.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Air Fresh Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Speaking of this, almost everybattle I have been in someone brings up Lil Wayne like it's really dissing me or something, imo dissing me for liking Lil Wayne is pretty weak; keep on voting anyway.</div>

Well, your past competitions didn't do it quite as well as Smitty did.

Especially Phun, he tried getting you at for FLA, but it backfired, he didn't do well at all.
 
Vote guys... It's two verses, just read em and vote.
 
I'm gonna have to go with AF and Swish15. AF was on top of his game, and I really liked his word play. Although my vote goes for AF and Swish, Chutney and Smitty had some good lines as well. Notibly, ''When there were 3 competitors on each side, your chances were legit,
But you lost your star player and we no longer have Carter to babysit.'' I also liked Smitty's line about Ja Rule.
 
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