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Can someone give me some hints/tips or help with battling? Im facing AZNxballer in the first round, but ive never done this before.
Chutney agreed to help but yeah, anything else is always good.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Carter Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">How you guys like my rap in my battle against Umair?</div>

Umm... it was okay, I guess. I've seen way better from you though.

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Umair thinks he has balls calling out me
Punk, I'm Carter not vcwannabe
You T-mac and I'm Kobe
I'm the greatest and you keep getting injured
And now you sit on the bench and get blisters
Umair haven't you learned your lesson not to mess with fire
I'm new and improved with a brand new desire
After this rap battle you might as well retire
</div>

That sounded a little wierd. Calling out me? It should be calling me out, but I guess you did it that way so you could rhyme it with vcwannabe.
 
That Verse was horrible, no offense, You tried too hard to rhyme and it had no killer punchline. Its sad that you're ranked ahead of me.
 
Ease up on the criticism. And drop the whole issue with the rankings. Its done and it ain't gonna change. Not everyones as "talented" as you.
 
<div class="quote_poster">GotSkillz92 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">That Verse was horrible, no offense, You tried too hard to rhyme and it had no killer punchline. Its sad that you're ranked ahead of me.</div>

Dude, save your complainings about the rankings till you're in the tourney and can prove WHY you deserved to be ranked higher.
 
^ If u mean the rankings, then check the official winter jbb rap forum or wutever its called
 
What yall think of my verse? I am still waiting for Carter to put in his final verse.
 
I've been <u>really</u> busy. I'm lucky I got that verse in. My next verse should be up later tonight.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Laker_fan Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Where are these infamous listings?</div>

I believe its on the 9th page of the Sign Up thread.
 
Anyone read or liked my verse against Carter? Any thoughts?
 
Umair, you've definately improved. So far, IMO your beating Carter. Just try not to make your lines soo long, cause sometimes its off on the flow factor.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Hand me the MIP Award, I am improving so much
You can call me Tmac cuz I am the best when it comes to clutch</div>.

Lol, isnt this the one you made upin the JBB sign up thread?
 
Let's hear some comments about the battle between me and GotSkillz.
 
Locke needs to resign as a judge and join the tourney! LOL
 
<div class="quote_poster">Locke Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Let's hear some comments about the battle between me and GotSkillz.</div>

comments or is there one more round?
it's pretty close right now but for me, gotskillz had TWO knockout lines - the one about Borat and Pamela and the one about the flag with the red leaf. if Locke is to get my vote, he's going to have to get a couple of knockout lines in the last round.....
 
Should be one more round on the way, depends on what he says. I have no problem either way.
 
<div class="quote_poster">CPaulDWade#3 Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">.

Lol, isnt this the one you made upin the JBB sign up thread?</div>

And......
It was mines wasn't it?

<div class="quote_poster">Iggy Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Umair, you've definately improved. So far, IMO your beating Carter. Just try not to make your lines soo long, cause sometimes its off on the flow factor.</div>
I edited some parts, read it again and tell me if its better.
 
GotSkillz/Locke is now done. Vote!
 
<div class="quote_poster">Umair Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">And......
It was mines wasn't it?


I edited some parts, read it again and tell me if its better.</div>

I checked it out again.

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Always be on caution he might be like a friend of Osama on TV holdin' a gunThis isn't even my best, its yo boy Umair coming for that number one
</div>

Better, but I think the second last line is still too long. When I read it, I don't really get a feel of how its supposed to flow.

Maybe cut some more words out. Like

"Be careful, Carter might be Osama's friend; holding a gun"
 
<div class="quote_poster">Chutney Wrote</div><div class="quote_post">Never compliment your opponent in a battle.</div>

Other than that how was it? Better than my first verse? I've been busy so these two were some of the quickest verses that I have ever posted.
 
Definitely better than your first, but I still get the impression that you're wasting lines. Your beginning and end were kind of pointless.
 
Always compliment your opponents in your battle, you are more likely to get a compliment in return!

lol, I've never battled before.
 
I will post my last verse when i get home from school. I will post it in about 7-8 hours.
 
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