Battle Round 1 - azn_iverson vs Air Fresh

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This is round 1 of the battle tournament. Try your best. The winner will advance to the next round, while the loser will be eliminated. You have 2 days to battle back and forth, and then a winner will be announce by the following criteria:

1. Originality ..../10
2. Rhyme Scheme ..../10
3. Creativity ..../10
4. Rebutals ..../10
5. Flow ..../10

total _____/50

Good luck! And have fun. Remember, if you are busy, I can always extend the time for the battle.
 
when it comes to freestyling i just have this thirst,
so i guess ill embaress you first and start the verse.
i dunno whats with your name, there must be some confusion
with the garbage you spit, your name should be air pollution
im a sick spitter, im the asian sensation.
its just too bad you wont go far as you face elimination.
you were wrong to join this battle, you should of backed down.
your just like tmac, cant make it passed the first round.
ill freestyle, flowingly and with grace and finesse
this is just the first verse, next time it wont be so effortless.
 
I don't even no why you started this wit me
you can call me D-wade because I bring the heat quickly
out the first round? I think you need to check again
by the end of these battles Ill come out the champion
thats a gurantee homie, not an opinion
Im hotter than fire so you cant handle what Im spittin
you an azn sensation...but who has ever heard of you?
Ill be 50 youll be ja rule and about to Murderrrrrrrr you!
I aint mad at T mac but my back is stronger den dat
I'll show up at your door with goons bigger than shaq
you talkin bout efortless but you aint even on my level
ask all the other people on this board, and theyll tell you
I spit garbage now? saying that dont make no sense
how could you say that when you never heard me spit?
so now Ill close this out wit a couple of lines/
you call me air pollution but boy Im fresh all the time/
and ya mom is a dime/ask her about me
she'll tell you that Im so fresh, I made her get on them knees
 
that freestyle was lame, you'll be the champion you claim?
if your 50 cent then i must be The Game.
speakin of 50 cent i really think that its strange,
cuz thats what i left your mom i told her to keep the change..
if you think you got down with my mom, you musta been drinkin some booze
the only reason she's on her knees is cuz she's prayin for you.
you think your a crazy a spitter, but you gotta stop lyin',
screw 50's movie yours should be quit now and stop tryin'.
your tryin so hard to make some decent lines,
but your just like chris anderson you can try a million times.
i dont even need to go on, i dont need to make this long,
cuz if i wanted to really dis you i could write a whole song.
even if you were with my mom i cant imagine you ready to spoon
unable to find a condom that fit so you used a waterballoon
you can't win this battle all you can do now is pray,
cuz i'll eat you up like i was at a chinese buffet.
 
you gonna eat me up now, what kind of line is that?
since you wanna talk about movies, that was Brokeback
listen to me when i tell you kid that you soo wack
you keep talkin that smack is gonna get your face cracked
how you gonna tell a brotha a condom dont fit
all the girls I kno tell me Asian men DONT GOT IT
you think your momma is on her knees because she is prayin
but the real reason is because I just got done sprayin/
yea we were doin that adult biz
then i pulled my pants up, and I left your crib
now your mother didnt really want me to tell you about this
but the truth really is that you are my kid
it doesn't stop there I'm not yet done
but I've decided to be nice and go easy on my son
azn_iverson you cannot see me
from now on your new name is mini B
and just cause you mini me, dont mean I wont whoop ya
no homo but Ill put that belt to ya
I dont really have much else to say
keep ya head up son tommorow is a new day
if you ever try to step up to ya dad again
I'll send you to hell like you commited a sin
 
damn right ill eat you up, its an expression if your a real spitter,
nah i saw you two on maury and it turns out "you are not the father"
you all ready know you've lost, so dont fake it like vince.
when it comes to rap knowledge your a bigger homer than Fresh Prince
damn you sprayed my mom, why you gotta spread the disease,
im just lucky shes okay and doesnt have your herpes.
what man? positions with your boyfriend weren't worth your while?
you had to watch brokeback to find out how to do doggy style
i forgot your mom died, go ahead to cry and be sad
but keep your head up you've got replacements; two new gay dads
your dissin' is a no-no, your delivery is just so-so
your two homosexual dads look like fat joe and eric snow
its okay to be embaressed, you know my spittin is dope
if you pulled down your pants to check your penis, you'd need a microscope
so go ahead and drop your shorts, go ahead and play
but just know if this were a forum i'd PWN you like my name was Mr. J
 
azn dawg you have choose the wrong road
if you wanna shoot out, Ima lock and load
my name is Brandon, and I live to be trill
not from OTR but I am the Real Deal
I got my doggy style from brokeback? thats a movie I aint even seen
but tell me why when I left your house I saw that on your Tv screen?
I need a microscope to see if I got a penis?
how would you even kno that when you have never seen it
ask ya moms and she'll tell you about my gun/
if you dont understand her, i'll shoot it in her face so you can see where im cumin from
I no I havent lost, but this makes no sense
how could my mom be dead if you just gave her "50 cents"
which story is it homie? you startin to look prettly lame
you play hard
and I'm bout to put an end to ya games
I'ma put you to shame, its over now
I got dudes on JBB readin this like "wow"
you aint nothin but a clown, Im sorry
and you saw us on Maury!
then I guess you cant take me to court
because the last 15 years i didnt even pay child support
 
you claim you got guns, you think you've got plenty?
damn i never new supersoakers counted, whats that a SP20?
how can you say you havnt seen it, that movie is yours.
as a matter of fact, i checked and you were one of the directors.
you's a pedaphile son, touchin kid in places like r. kelly
girls tell me because of your small dick doing you feels like slappin bellies
i told you, you aint my daddy, and even if you didnt pay child support
its not like you could of cuz you cant even afford
you'll be beggin on the streets and i mean this literally
you'll be like latrell sprewell unable to feed a family
you cant find a date, and your lucky if you get raped.
no woman wants to do you, so you always keep your hands in good shape.
when you watch nba highlights you probably do "five on one"
dunno if you know what that means but it dont mean basketball son
 
Ima get you azn
Ima knock you out da first round, Im like a young Iron Mike
the bad thing about it is you havent put up much of a fight
Im turnin the lights off, its time to say goodnight
I kno you cant see me, I'm no where in sight
my first intial is B, yea dats right
call me Killa B ,because Ima take yo honey tonight
I seen you ask Brian to extend the time
I no why, the truth is u runnin out of lines
whatever dawg I can run for days
your weak rhymes aint gettin me phased
I hold my own, and break ya bones-like AI when I cross you,
Im used to schoolin punks, and I just taught you
I've taught you that effin with Air Fresh is one thing NOT TO
GOT YOU
 
Ill rip you one more time before I leave for da day
I wish I could stay, but I got money to make
I no you scared to lose to me, I can tell
run yo ass over with a drop on some spinnin wheels, since im like latrell
you azn_Iverson dawg what is that?
Id laugh my ass off if I ever saw an asian dude with braids and tats
the only similiarity is that neither of you can rap
mess wit B and I swear to you youll get your face fatt
I'm r.kelly and a pedophile what is the problem wit you?
the only kids Im touchin are the ones like you
no homo dont try and make it out like that
what I mean is that youll get touched wit a gat
your window of opportunity is gone, I done threw out the key
take a minute and thank god for surving a round with B
next time homie you might not be so lucky
I'll lyrically murder you, and leave your mic bloody
 
i aint puttin much of a fight? common you know that aint true
cuz when it comes to freestyle artest raps better than you.
what are you shakin? are you breakin'? my head is now achin'
cuz im scared if your invisible, you must be gay like clay aiken.
you best stop spittin, your better off to quit,
if you were invisible just come outta the closet.
yea ill say good night, cuz i was with your girl last night
and i kno your there smiling, cuz i can see the yellow light
i dunno what you want, but ill call you killa bee,
cuz you'll be buzzing arround spreading HIV.
if i keep free-in like this i dunno how long you'll survive,
so you should go buzz home back on to your hive.
i havnt learned **** from you, this is my final warning
i've been owning you all night, and ill do it all morning
brian just close this thread, cuz this fool can't battle with the pros
hey yo, killa bee why don't you fetch me some honey nut cheerihoes

i see you've got money to make, and thats how you roll
but tell me B, why do you have to strip on a pole?
im scared to lose, man your too funny,
cuz if this were yo momma id leave here with the cash muhney.
if your so lyrically talented, why are people sayin i've got this won
its sad, cuz if you were my daddy, you'd be beat by your own son
you say your a great rapper, you probably have a dream to pursue
but if you was a true rapper, you wouldnt rhyme you with you.
don't worry when you lose, people will congratulate your loss right after,
yea, thank god i survived a round with you, without dying of laughter.
 
be careful my rhymes are fierce,
cross me at the wrong time and youll get shanked like pierce
that aint a joke either Im serius
are you in your right mind to battle me you must be delerious
I dont spit I throwup, cause Im sick and mysterious
Ima hit you, have blood pourin out your head like a period.
Im like a cobra Im all over the place
eff with me again and Ima spit my venom in ya face
people tellin you you gott this battle won?
them people tellin you that gotta be on drugs
I aint no dealer but ill still give yall dat crack
step to the pimp and like a ho youll get back slapped
you aint no famous dude, you aint gettin no deals
my fist must be charcoal cuz you mess wit me, itll be in ya grill
and thats for real
you gotta suck ya dad just ta get a meal!
im tellin you azn this is the end of the road, the end of the line
you shoulda been smart and paid attention to the caution signs
this battle is mine and you shoulda stopped when u had a chance
now its time to take ya ass beatin like a man
no homo again, I do not what you thinkin
you prolly wanna d and your mouth and swallow it like u drinkin
you wont ever be the same after this whoopin
they might have to check your ass into a mental institution
stop now, its the first round and Im bout to send a haymaker
when I connect we'll see whose gonna be the one who really shakin
I no it must hurt all these shots that you takin
but if you been patient, ima end this now
I no now, this is a battle that im ownin
Hey brian go ahead and tell me my next opponent
thatll be my next victim
cause Im vicious
dare anyone to try me, youll be sleepin wit fishes
I dont run with the mafia, but you askin for a death wishes
 
your saying i have to suck my dad to get my own food?
damn the only reason you say that is cuz you miss being screwed.
fresh, you MUST be gay, yo man whats the deal?
why the hell would i suck you, to get my meal?
man its really sad you gotta get a mate,
cuz i thought you was my daddy, and i thought you was straight.
haha if i wanna get a meal b**** i just get my plate,
if you really miss the feelin of suckin why dont you masturbate
haha you sound so angry, your patience must be growin thin
i don't even have to post a verse cuz either way id still win
i dont have to sit here, readin this crap,
people are tellin my i've won because they KNOW rap.
you'll spray venom at me? man you need to see a hygeinest
cuz the only thing you spray, is jizz from your dads' penis
how you gonna tell me that my road is done?
cuz after this win it has just begun.
after this battle for you there will be no more,
so might as well read other battles to find out who you can cheer for.
go ahead, just check some battles you can be a silent reader,
or better yet you can be umair's only supporting cheerleader.
if you wanna freestyle battle, you gotta learn to rebuttle,
cuz all your tryin to do is act gangster to win this battle.
your wannabe free style dont rhyme and it doesnt flow,
you tryin to free, is harder than watchin shaq shoot a free throw
haha.. i aint hurtin' at all and its YOU that seems pissed,
dont worry you can tell your friends you battled me, as i practiced.
you must of beat a noobie too, cuz all of this is just karma
you say this is a battle? well to me its just warm up.
i dunno what you were thinkin, you didnt understand what i meant
cuz your just my practice dummy, im waiting for a worthy opponent
when they made this freestyle battle, it wasnt to fool around
cuz if you say your a true rapper, your a bigger bust than kwame brown
i dont have to have to be a wangsta or have claims that are absurd
theres no need to hurt you, ill diss you til your emotionally disturbed
you'll be disturbed so deeply your every thought will be haunted,
then maybe you'll stop acting like the guy from malibu's most wanted
 
i saw you lookin at the thread, and yet you did not post
readin my lyrics, made you feel like you just saw a ghost
i know im not supposed to post but ill make this quick,
our freestyles are almost gettin as long as my dick,
so ill stop now so you have a length that your familiar with.
 
azn said:
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">i told you, you aint my daddy,</div>
then says
<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">cuz i thought you was my daddy,</div>
Man I got this.



I thought we went on maury and I turned out not to be your father,
homeboy your keep digging your hole farther and farther
Im not even gay, thats my point
whats wrong with your kid, you been locked in da joint?
all I see is your little gay jokes, maybe thats because you are homo
I honestly don't understand what people see
your rhymes are cheesey as hell, when all I make is cheese
how you gonna talk about my flow, Im a beast
that is at least compared to you,
you type "haha" when you rap like that sh** is cool
when that sh** is really wack, you ain't on my level fool
Ima knock you off the cliff once and for all
think your last thoughts, than enjoy the free fall
cause when you hit the bottom your a** is done
my rhymes is sick, you should already no that son
Ill smack you with my mic, maybe thatll teach you a lessson
you people need to get off this mans, sack
he aint Jin, and that Malibu comparison was WACK
cause I aint never try to be someone I aint,
my rhymes are like paint,
they stick to the walls of ya mind
inhale to much of em and you might die
dont say I didnt try to warn you and be nice
but you gotta learn your lesson somehow right?
my rhymes i hard, and I dont spit bars
I'll throw dumbells, eff throwin a shell
anybody thats real can tell
that you fake, and Im legit as hell
this aint even a warm up for me, its more like a shoot around
if you keep effin around youll get shot to the ground
people sayin you winnin gotta be retarded,
I'll bring my team back as if I was Miller at the Garden
you choose the wrong path I bet you wish you never started it
I'm clutch ,I aint missin no free throws at all bi**h
I'm cool dog, your lines do not phase me
Ill put 13 on ya in 35 seconds like McGrady
Im tellin you Im crazy, you cannot beat me
you got more bandwagoners then the Miami Heat
the same dudes givin you props should kno your arent better than Big B
you had a couple decent lines but your pretty much an amateur
tell me who has ever heard of an AI wannabe rapper from Canada?
if you wanna keep fightin thats cool with me cause Im an animal
I kno as you type your losin every inch of your stamina
your weak dawg Im tellin you you cannot handle this, with your wack flow
B will chew you up and spit you out like you were chewing tobacco
if ou still wanna eff with me than LETS GO
Im tellin you tho Im lethal like Methol
and even tho I gont hang with goasts
Ill pull up with a phantom, and cook you like a roast
this beef aint even close, I can brag and boast
you gonna end up behind me and get burnt like toast
I kno this battle is over, Ima put up a toast

Edit:
Eff it dog I aint even done yet
Im like Dre, you Like Nate Rob, everybody knos Im the best
and we all no thats your chances of winning are suspect
cause Kenny Smith aint judging this damn contest
eff writing a song, I could make an AZn diss bible
I wont stop spittin till I have the Battle Title
Im takin over B**ch, Air Fresh yo tyrant

so bow down to my thrown, cause u cannot eff with dis diss
I aint King James, but JustBball is my witness
 
aite so air fresh thats gonna be your last verse,
i dunno wanna hear another dis, or another lame curse.
dissin me is like goin deeper and deeper in your own hole,
just like isiah paying players like he had an unlimited payroll
man you aint original, your every other line has whack
but i'll finish you now so that your unable to come back.
once you've been dissed by me its like bein diagnosed with cancer,
i build up, quiet you down until your so weak you cant answer
you'll need a systematical plan for therapy, like a regime
you cant come back from this battle even with both miller and mcgrady on your team
cuz both of em don't compare to my dream team, with AI to cross you up and kareem to ruin your scheme
your style, your flow, your lyrics dont even stick to the same theme
after im through, your dim light of ideas won't get any brighter,
might as well quit now and hire The Dream as your ghost writer,
stop denying that your obsessed with touching the youth,
your just pissed cuz i called you gay and you cant handle the truth.
it aint my fault you werent blessed with my lyrical gift,
now the only thing that can help you is a mircale lift.
fresh you havnt won, but you tried your best punk,
its just to bad when god made you, he was high AND drunk
thats how your mother ended up givin birth to some junk.
your mom shoulda takin it in portions, or gone through with the abortion
cuz your defective, demented, and out of proportion
hated you so bad she wanted to abandon, but she held on and named the piece of shiz brandon
son, you've run out of luck, and now your done and stuck, don't be pissed cuz yu got your ass kicked by a canuck.
agreeing to this battle, you were rolling the dice to take a price, next time be more precise, ask for some advice, becuase your about to get sliced.
man you a sucka at rapping you rhyme the same words twice,
you gotta stop and think try to maake your rap nice.
dont say im not at your level, cuz that gives me more energy, and more fuel call me the bus driver cuz im taking you to school.
don't ever disrespect me fool, cuz i can be cruel, you think that its cool but b**** ive won this dual.
i've got supporters and a clan, all the way from china to japan
don't be hating on me man, just cuz you aint got a fan.
ill tick you off like a bomb, im the detonator device
ill steam your ass like a dumpling and serve you over rice.
this battle has died, cuz you just got fried, i've ruined your pride, busted you open wide, you had to decide, and you tried to make a stride but its over cuz i'm bout to eat with soy sauce on the side.
talents like me are rare, but i did not spare you cuz that would be unfair
air fresh to me you don't even compare, i swear its over just go chill wit umair
this wasn't even a battle cuz you was just a rookie,
you need all the luck you can get, i shoulda gave you a fortune cookie
b**** stop tellin brian to notify your next foe,
cuz i'm your first, your worst and your final one bro.
for you this is the end of the story, for me this is just the start of my glory,
but take of your shoes biatch cuz this is asian territory.
its done, its over this b**** accepted his defeat,
yo mr.j, bks where do you wanna grab a bite to eat.
any ideas of where to eat? i was thinking chinese.
B you can come, but one false move and your eating on your knees
dont bring backup fresh ill whoop all your "killa bees"
i'll tear all of them right open so you can see their flesh
hey waiter ill have some steamed dumpling and i want them air fresh.
 
you actually wrote back, I dont even no why?
you shoulda just took your whoopin, but you must wanna die
I killed you with my last verse so I dont even gotta try
this battle is done, I broke ya back
no brokeback, so I dont even have to bring my team back
I'm already ahead, your rhymes are dead
dont you notice your raps are getting repetitive
I'll stomp you out punk leave a Jumpman on ya head
eff battling you I got better s**t to do instead
Im replyin to you at college, actually
when Im done I gotta go to class
Im done eatin ya lunch, meet me after my next class
no homo azn, Ima straight whoop ya ass
the thing is you and your team is weak
azn you couldnt beat me if you had Jackie Chan and Bruce Lee
you see?
Im better then you, so take the L
if you disagree, duck I might throw a shell
its time for me to drop another dumbell
you cant handle the weight so we kno youll fail
dont come in the jungle, if you cant handle the heat
you'll be lookin black and yellow after I leave you in the street
you read my battle last night and I kno you couldnt reply
your bit** a** probably when into mental shock
you prolly realized and said "messin wit B is gonna get me popped"
Ill pop you like a zit
cause your rhymes is s**t
you need to get a damn job, and get off my tip
puss will be runnin out of you once I popped you
I told you dawg missin with me is something you should not do
and if any n***a in here wanna disagree
I'll leave him black and red like the Jordans on my feet
ya sig is kinda funny, your gonna get owned
if your Jins apprentice then Ima SERIUS JONES
this battle is over go home
your rhymes are weak you stupid in the dome
wit your gay ass lines take a damn seat
I'm already a step above you,
how is the bottom of my feet?
 
thats funny and crazy, you idolize serius jones?
shiz your jokes are older than the flinstones.
see serius jones battled jin and jin got beat,
but jin challened jones again and jones couldnt take the heat.
jin knew he could beat him, when the time came around
but serius was a ***** and a coward he denied and backed down.
see thats how the battle is with you and me
you may have beat me with one verse but when i respond you flee
i checked the thread last night, to see how your freestyle unfurled
but i didnt have the chance to post cuz i was f***kin with your girl
ill own you in rap on every occasion, ill stomp your crew like an invasion
shiz bruce lee's MOM can whoop your ass don't be hatin cuz im asian.
you'll leave me with a jumpman? black? red? white? and yellow?
shiz man what you showing off your colors like you just learned the rainbow?
you must feel the frustration, cause of my domination
i aint hatin on your nation, just YOU cuz you need an education,
after this battle ill use my money, and form a foundation for donation, for people like you who can't resist the temptation of using some vibration.
you can't get rid of me or my disses, im just like weed,
your greed, leads you right back to me.
smokin hot disses, lets you know whos superior.
then it gets inside your body, and deteriorates your interior.
the smell of smoke and defeat, my disses you cant beat,
they get bigger and better as they swell, inside your body they dwell
i'm winning this battle, im winning this war
your addicted to me, cuz i have you commin back for more
ass whoopin that is, cuz you know im still toyin around
you try to bounce back but i pound your ass back to the ground
your just like a wimpy hound, that i found, ill send you back to the compound
i dont even know why you entered, cuz ill just chow you down.
screw the hound comparison your more like a puppy from bow wow.
air fresh your battle gonna make me snooze,
cuz you rapped half your shiz, bout your nike shoes.
you must be suckin on some cum or rum, cuz your jokes are getting dumb
"your stupid in the dome" you'll think better when you get your thumb outta your dads bum
 
Live from my laptop, and I ain’t done
Scratch you off my list of problems, cause this battle aint no longer one
The thing is though, I’ve got this battle won
How many times must I say that before its all said and done?
I gotta enough blaze to light up a forest
Your rhymes are getting similar, you need to pull out a thesaurus
I hate to tell you this but your rhymes are just OK
You never on your grind, when I hustle everyday
If you were smart azn you’d listen to what I say
And what Im gona say is you aint winnin this battle today
You were a problem before, but you aren’t now because I’ve solved you
Call me The Answer, and the Problem Solver
This diss has potential to be really, really long
It’s literally not in your interests to battle me on JBB, so go play some ping pong
And that’s real, not even a lie
Look under interests in his JBB profile
Serius Jones may not have took Jin’s new propose
Jin already lost so it’s pointless I suppose
So that’s why I say I’m like Jones, dude
Cause seriusly I’ve got better s**t to do
I ain’t asian but I’m something like a dragon
When I open up my mouth,
all fire come out
Watch your step or youll get burned
Tell me Azn when will you learn?
Man one of my verses could make a tight song,
I started this verse at school but now I am bout to take it home
I’m gonna tell you now that Ive got some knowledge
I need some education? I’m only 16 in college.
You thought you did, but I didn’t think you knew
Don’t tell me I aint smart, when Im prolly smarter than you
I could go forever its easy for me to go off wit this…..
I don’t need to sign the Dream, I’m gonna get Umair to finish you off for my next diss
 
you say i was a problem, cuz im jins apprentice
this was just practice, you as a problem never existed
you can say that this is done, you can say that you've won
but how many comments have your recieved? did i hear none?
your a sucka air fresh, your just outta the equation
your probably caucasion but you gotta stop actin asian
all your fans aint true, they just jumped on the bandwagon,
i told you, you spit garbage nothin close to a dragon.
what you got dylan from making the band on hire?
does he write all of your lines? "i spit hot fire"
you aint the answer, im still here, and you aint a problem solver
if you want your problems solved just shoot yourself with a revolver
your rap uses easy rhymes, you say I need a thesaurus?
if your freestyle was a song i'd be rappin the chorus.
your disses are week, and for sure you can't free
the only rappin you should be doin is under the christmas tree
you've been using useless rhymes, that dont belong
so im gonna keep this short, short but strong.
my disses and jokes, are effective and witty,
16 and in college? more like clown university.
im like water your metal, ill rust you slowly each verse,
my curses disturb and weaken thats why your verses keep gettin worse.
weaker and weaker they get, they start to diminish
good call umair you need someone better than you to finish
sure i playing ping pong when ever your girl calls,
i named my testies ping and pong so she be playin with my balls.
 
man I'll go wild
azn you would be better off swagger jackin my style
maybe then you would have a chance to see B
but until that day you can never see me
the weed line in your last verse was pretty dope
that junk don't work on me tho, cause I don't smoke
If this free was a song you'd be rappin the chorus?
I no I owned you before, but now I got you doin my chores!
and why is my girl playin with your "testies",
when the last time i checked my girl is your mommie
ugh I didnt no she gets down like that, I'm surprised
the last time I checked a mom touchin her son is a crime
now I kno why, you cannot rhyme, at all
your mind is messed up cause your parents are in your draws
I don't need comments from 14 years olds thats ok
I kno i got this battle on lock down anyway
this aint myspace, i aint lookin for a comment
I'm just here to rip you for a moment
when I'm done Ill go about doin what I was doin

I hit up umair to hook me up wit a feature
not that he is better than me but even he could beat ya
 
im taking you to school, breakin ankles like hot sauce
why would i steal your style, you cant trick me into a loss.
ive all ready won this battle, i wont lose this race,
the only way ill lose is if you write against yourself and take my place.
so b-22, air fresh or whatever hang on to your dildo strap,
cuz this battle is like chicken in tortillia, its a wrap
ive won and im just entertaining this show,
cuz there never was a challenge this was decided long ago.
i cant believe you dont know your own girl and its not my mother
my moms been cheating on you all along with your own brother.
see i dont have a problem with that cuz she had a plan,
she left your ass because she wanted a real man.
i aint doin your chores, cuz without me in the song it wouldnt sell in stores.
no ones wants to hear your songs, they dont even care to get it
cuz im like chamillionaire your krayzie bones i get all the credit.
 
your 4 mins late but Ill respond to you anyway

break ankles like Hot Sauce? yea right
your rhymes are recycled and dry
I aint never wearin no dildo, why would you talk like that?
probably because your used to havin one up yo a**
your mom has been cheatin on me all this time, oh well
cause the thing is I've been cheatin as well, I've got many others
the only problem with your rebutal is that I don't even have a brother....
how was this not a challege when you can't even hang with me
half of the lines in your diss don't even diss me
half of your ish is made up out of speculation
the only time you gettin coochie is if u were masterbatin
also how could your mom cheatin on me if we weren't datin
so she is my girl, look at your statement
that means she was my girl you just contradicted your statements
your come backs are dull, I block em with my hands as a shield
if you cant handle the hits, get off the field
your softer than a cupcake, and softer than cheese
next time think a minute before you want it with me
cause I'm harder than a rock, and thats already settled
Azn to me, you aint nothing but a pebble
I no this is the end its been nice
now go tell ya momma to fix me my dam fried rice
 
aite its over.. i cant post anymore
good battlin with you air fresh,
i didnt expect the competition to be
this good. hopefully whoever wins
will get a break and face like vcwannabe!
hahaha
 
word

this was fun

good luck
 
yo air fresh i know its over but did you have a favorite line of mine? haha i was just wondering which line you thought was my best so i can improve that style..
for you, i just loved your last line... that got me bad
"I no this is the end its been nice
now go tell ya momma to fix me my dam fried rice"
 
I think Azn_Iverson won, he had some sick disses that won me over. Good battle.
 
your weed line in that one verse was pretty sick. My favorite
 
Probably the best battle. Big props to both guys. I have to give the edge to azn_iverson. He was just too funny. I just saw azn_iverson's line about me.
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