Hip Hop Battle Discussion Thread

[Iggy]

yo brian can i set that match up between vcwannabe and umair?

 

[Really Lost One]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting azn_iverson:</div><div class="quote_post">yo brian can i set that match up between vcwannabe and umair?</div>
Wait until after the battles end and the winner has been announced

 

[Iggy]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Brian:</div><div class="quote_post">Wait until after the battles end and the winner has been announced</div>

aww..... fine, i just can't wait to see the legendary matchup.

 

[bbwSwish]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting azn_iverson:</div><div class="quote_post">aww..... fine, i just can't wait to see the legendary matchup.</div>

Drop it man. How would you feel if you were one of those guys?

I wouldn't even want to compete in a battle like that because it's just going to lead to fighting and getting teased.

 

[Iggy]

vcwannabe15 is up for it though.. and umair wants to battle too.

 

[umair]

Swish15 i dont care if others talk about me. I dont care, it doesn't hurt me anymore. But vcwannabe, YOUR GOING DOWN! No teasing or fighting guys. Let GET IT STARTED!

 

[Legacy]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Umair15:</div><div class="quote_post">Swish15 i dont care if others talk about me. I dont care, it doesn't hurt me anymore. But vcwannabe, YOUR GOING DOWN! No teasing or fighting guys. Let GET IT STARTED!</div>

 

[umair]

Thats not funny, its true

 

[Karma]

Any thoughts/comments on my verse for Smitty?

 

[Chutney]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Junoon:</div><div class="quote_post">Any thoughts/comments on my verse for Smitty?

</div>
Damn man, you brought it. The whole first half was just pure bombs and, as usual, you're wordplay was superb. I liked those 4 lines that rhymed in a row (towards the beginning).


I replied to MrJ. Should be back in an hour or so, if there's something to answer back to.

 

[Iggy]

See swish15, umair and vcwannabe want to go at it, haha they are already talking trash.

On a sidenote, Brian said I can't start the battle until after the tournament has ended. So vcwannabe and umair you guys should start getting ready haha.

 

[B.e.]

MrJ your nice but your talking about the general stuff to much, I.e. sex jokes and guns. Try and talk about something different. Chutney also brought it with his verse.

 

[J_Ray]

I thought we were going to go with the rankings from last round? Why is #1 against #2 in semi-final? This is more outrageous than the Mavs playing the Spurs in the 2nd round!

 

[Karma]

MrJ, I liked the whole Knickerbocker play on your verse.

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">
Fallacious is your word if you doubt I’ll have any block bucking wild
Audacious is what you are for stepping to me, you cock-sucking child
</div>

Although the vocab useage in the verse is nice, the cock-sucking child part is somewhat weak IMO.

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">
And you’re so predictable, just like your chicks
</div>

I didn't really get that line.

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">
your next stop is in the lose-bracket
It’s either that or this fruit basket will be laying in a new casket
</div>

I like the multi usage there, and how it flows.

Chutney, I liked this whole section from you:

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">
Trying to predict the unpredictable? You might damage your mind,
Got more skill in my pinky than your last 2 opponents combined,
Calling me clich?d when you still rap of guns and bitches,
Guess you lost your inspiration, just in the game for the riches,
Hit your ceiling 2 rounds ago, now with no gas in the tank
You face a real challenge that’ll leave you drawing a blank,
Forgot to include a beat, but I’ll say this in your defense,
Not even Dre can make one that could hide that nonsense,
</div>

The line I bolded could have been rewritten to somehting better IMO...if you look at it, it doesn't really make any sense and the punch just seems weak overall. However, I thought that was the only downfall of that portion I quoted, everything else was nice.

Okay, I just realized it seems like I'm voting on the battle or somehting the way I'm quoting, but this is just some things I feel you guys can improve on and come stronger with on the 2nd verse. Good battle so far you guys.

 

[Karma]

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">
I thought we were going to go with the rankings from last round? Why is #1 against #2 in semi-final? This is more outrageous than the Mavs playing the Spurs in the 2nd round!
</div>

Since this is an NBA-related board, our rankings are just as messed up as the NBA's itself

.

Actually though, I think Brian was in a rush so he just hurriedly made up the matchups. I don't mind, it woulda been a challenge either way and I think this round will definetly be sick.

 

[Iggy]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting J_Ray:</div><div class="quote_post">I thought we were going to go with the rankings from last round? Why is #1 against #2 in semi-final? This is more outrageous than the Mavs playing the Spurs in the 2nd round!</div>

They re-did the seeds after the second round. So really this round the seeds are:
1. MrJ
2. Smitty
3. Junoon
4. Chutney

 

[Chutney]

Lovin' the feedback from Junoon. I'll be sure to go a little more in depth next time.

 

[Smitty]

Finally posted my reply, check it out.

 

[Mr. J]

Posted the reply.

 

[Karma]

Posted mine as well. Any feeds? MrJ, I'll comment on yours in a while.

 

[Smitty]

^Damn man you are good haha..I dunno if ima win this one..

I'll post my response tonight.

 

[bbwSwish]

Let's make the "Consolation Bracket".

Loser bracket sounds like we all suck ass.

 

[Chutney]

Finally got back on, after a busy day. MrJ, I'm going to try and post a reply soon.

 

[Chutney]

Finally got my reply up. I tried to make a stronger rebuttal, because that seemed to be the biggest criticism after Round 2.


EDIT: Smitty, you're gonna have to step it up if you want to challenge Junoon. Your materials looked too juvenile when matched up to his wordplay. He called you out on rhyming the word sh*t 3 times, and your subject matter needs to be more personal/relevant.

Junoon, you're rebutall was great. You went after his weak points and I especially liked the end:

<div class="quote_poster">Quote:</div><div class="quote_post">Talkin about guns and chicks, stop stoopin~to~illusions
Your act is all a delusion, I'll bruise~you~to~contusion//
Leave you in a state of seclusion, now let me wind up my conclusion
My raps leave you feelin stabbed so much, you'll need a blood transfusion//</div>

That's just beautiful. The HIV line would have stood out more if it flowed better.

 

[Run BJM]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Swish15:</div><div class="quote_post">Let's make the "Consolation Bracket".

Loser bracket sounds like we all suck ass.</div>
That's because you do (collectively) suck ass.

 

[Mamba]

Mrj came weak in his first verse, disappointed.

Chutney came correct.

 

[Smitty]

I finally posted my reply..sorry if it took long, I'm very tired right now but I did the best I could. I'll probably lose but at least I made it this far..GL Junoon.

 

[bbwSwish]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Run BJM:</div><div class="quote_post">That's because you do (collectively) suck ass.

</div>

Me vs. You right now.

 

[Karma]

Thanks for the feed Chutney.

Me and Smitty are done our battle and I'm guessing Chutney and MrJ are too (if you have an even number of verses). Chutney, if you guys wanna keep on going feel free but me and Smitty mutually decided to stop at 2 verses each.

Good luck to all 3 of you guys.

And Smitty, don't worry about it, you still came nice with all of your verses.

I guess you guys can start voting on the battles (well atleast ours for sure, not sure about Chutney/MrJ's).

 

[Chutney]

I'm still leaving it open for MrJ to post another reply. It's all up to him. I don't mind ending it now, but I can go for a few more verses if he wants (4 max).