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To be honest with you guys..this has been the first times I EVER freestyled...but hey whether I lose or not, I'm kinda happy I made it this far..a little suprised even.

btw if you win Junoon..you better clean house in the finals.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Smitty:</div><div class="quote_post">To be honest with you guys..this has been the first times I EVER freestyled...but hey whether I lose or not, I'm kinda happy I made it this far..a little suprised even.

btw if you win Junoon..you better clean house in the finals.</div>
You serious Smitty? Damn! You're pretty good
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To be honest with you guys..this has been the first times I EVER freestyled...but hey whether I lose or not, I'm kinda happy I made it this far..a little suprised even.

btw if you win Junoon..you better clean house in the finals.
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If that was your first time freestylin (or keystylin, whatever you wanna call it), then I gotta
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Your keystyles are really nice and you've come hard with some of the best lines in the entire tourney, props man.

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btw if you win Junoon..you better clean house in the finals.
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I'll try
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Chill, I'm not done yet. Let's keep on going 'til whenever.
 
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Your cancerous presence has voters reachin? for medication,
But, my rhymes are the miracle cure, similar to radiation,
F**k Webster?s, I used a thesaurus and got different information,
Read words like: pre-mature, clich?d, overrated, and desperation,
Your flow?s inconsistent and I shatter your defense like glass,
Don?t know if I should continue the offensive or just pity your ass,

Done with b***h jokes? You busted out the worst one I?ve heard,
Ending your post with a contradiction makes you look so absurd,

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Once again, entire portion is strong...and I felt your verse was solid all the way through this time. The radiation line coulda been written in a better manner IMO but everyone will get how you meant to write that line anyway so it's all good. The line still hits. The bolded part is nice as well. And good lookin out on the contradiction.

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Correction: like birds with a flu, I?m always dropping hot sh!t
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That's a hot line.

MrJ you said you're done talking about girls and bring up the "your girl looks like Ewing" thing, which I didn't think hit him too hard either way. Your vocab useage is nonethless impressive. Anyways, once again, a good battle, this one's going to be hard to vote on when it's all said and done.
 
MrJ is definitely nice with the different vocabulary ect, but at times he has lines that can ruin his verses.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Air Fresh:</div><div class="quote_post">MrJ is definitely nice with the different vocabulary ect, but at times he has lines that can ruin his verses.</div>
Yeah, I haven't been thinking straight these past couple of days.

Btw, I posted my reply to Chuntey.
 
Man yall still aint done yet? It's been like 4 days lol.
 
We should just start the voting, both of you have the same amount of verses.
 
Is today the last day of votes? The voting margin is widely in the favor of Chutney right now.
 
Junoon vs Chutney in the finals is going to be real interesting.
 
At least I lost to a legend!

But enough of that, it's consulation bracket time.
 
Aren't you going to wait until after the finals are over?
 
Thanks guys, and don't worry it'll be a great battle.

Well Chutney, you got your All-Canuck finish
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But good luck nonetheless, and let's make the last battle (of the first JBB tourney) something to remember.
 
damn Junoon you need a music career no crap. you should ghost write for rappers make a ton of money. where do you live? i live in NYC and a lot of people would have a use for your raps - producers etc.
 
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damn Junoon you need a music career no crap. you should ghost write for rappers make a ton of money. where do you live? i live in NYC and a lot of people would have a use for your raps - producers etc.
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Haha, I've never thought about ghost writing...but I want nothin to do with music, I just like writing. I used to always rap for fun and write/record songs to express whatever I was feelin at the time, it used to be a hobby before, but after a while I got tired of it. But battling is much harder I think. I live in T.O (GTA) but honestly, as far as ghost writing goes, I've written for some of my friends but I found that annoying as well cause if you can't write your own ****, it's harder for me to respect you as an artist.
 
Replied to Junoon. I definitely wasn't planning on going that long for a first verse, but an idea popped into my head and I had to run with it. Anyways, it's too late and I need some sleep.
 
<div class="quote_poster">Quoting Chutney:</div><div class="quote_post">Replied to Junoon. I definitely wasn't planning on going that long for a first verse, but an idea popped into my head and I had to run with it. Anyways, it's too late and I need some sleep.</div>

Wow... I'm speechless.
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Done my reply. Had to respond with a long verse to a long verse by Chutney
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I'm not feeling it Junoon. Nothing jumped out at me and it didn't have the sting that Chutney's did.
 
I thought it was pretty sick, but it didn't flow well.
 
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I cut one or two words out from one or two of the longer sentences...but honestly in terms of the flow, it depends on the perspective of the reader. When I wrote it, I rapped it to myself before I sumbitted it, and it flowed to me (although some parts were somewhat long, but I trimmed it down somewhat now). I'll try to come stronger next verse for sure don't worry.
 
I see what you mean about flow. That's why its hard to judge in keystyling. It also depends on how fast you rap some parts, so I guess its wrong for me to grill you on flow unless it really doesnt.
 
"dropping emotiocon jaws"
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Chutney, you're sick.
 

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