Word of advice....if you have to advertise how much time you spent on it.....you probably didnt spend enough time on it.Keep working on it....and pimp out that BG some.
It's good for a quick 15 minute sig. I'd move the text up towards the middle cuz there's too much empty space in the upper left.. the pic effect works, but I wouldn't use it like you did on his helmet--it looks good everywhere else.