Rate my writing

[Clangus]

I am looking for some feedback from you guys aboiut my writing. I would like to improve so some feedback would be nice. Here are some of the things I have put ffort into. Pretty please take the tyime to read a few of them and rate me.FunnyMVP'sMavsPistons -written before Bilups was injured

 

[Clangus]

Please! :shok:

 

[Trail_Blazer]

I like the MVP thread, with the picture that accompanied each player you were making points on.