Like echo said, the background is too sharp, edgy and scratchy and although the effects on the cut sort of match the effects on the background, it doesn't really look that good. Text is sorta plain but not too bad, I like how you've got a couple more in other places while not being too noticeable.
The cut isn't very good IMO, the arms need work and his jersey/shorts aren't cut well enough. His left wrist/hand is cut too sharp and you need to work on taking more time to cut it better and more closely, looking for small things to make it look better.