The Nets Haiku Thread

[GMJ]

I know its crazy
and what is up with these two? </p>

Denny Crane's naughty</p>

 

[GMJ]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (CelticKing)</div><div class='quotemain'>

well i'll try this again
am I doing it right this time?
its not easy you know</p></div>

6
8
6</p>

Count them out</p>

I'll try this again
Am I doing it right now?
This isn't easy</p>

 

[pegs]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (GMJigga)</div><div class='quotemain'>

I know its crazy
and what is up with these two? </p>

Denny Crane's naughty </p></div>

</p>

what is he, a freak?</p>

no S & M, not for me.</p>

a little too weird</p>

 

[CelticKing]

ok now I got it
I will not mess this up again
but it is damn hard
</p>

 

[pegs]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (CelticKing)</div><div class='quotemain'>

ok now I got it (6)
I will not mess this up again (8)
but it is damn hard (5)(correct!)
</p></div>

</p>

close, on the right track</p>

think syllables King, not words</p>

five, seven, five</p>

(i'll separate what your haiku should be based on syllables, with dashes in between)</p>

o-k - i - got - it (5)</p>

i - won't - mess - this - up - a-gain (7)</p>

but - it - is - damn - hard (5) </p>

 

[CelticKing]

it is very hard
indeed now that I think about
I was counting words</p>

</p>

</p>

(hopefully i got it now ) </p>

 

[GMJ]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (CelticKing)</div><div class='quotemain'>

it is very hard
indeed now that I think about
I was counting words</p>

</p>

</p>

(hopefully i got it now ) </p>

</div></p>

in-deed-now-that-I-think-a-bout</p>

Eight. c'mon you got this!</p>

</p>

 

[Dumpy]

Big screen TV's here!</p>

It's time for Lord of the Rings!</p>

Break out the popcorn.</p>

</p>

 

[pegs]

what, Lord of the Rings?</p>

i would rather watch rambo.</p>

he's one crazy mofo </p>

 

[GMJ]

Break out ya popcorn
It's time for the TO show
Sundays and Mondays

 

[Legacy]

This game is boringBut very addicting, yesI can't stop playing</p>

 

[pegs]

i want to see nets</p>

is training camp televised?</p>

it really should be</p>

 

[GMJ]

Hey its not a game,
although everybody wins,
This s*** is real life

 

[#1_War_Poet_ForLife]

I love sopcast lots.</p>

Lets me watch the Bengals games.</p>

It is the bestest.</p>

 

[CelticKing]

I am tired now
from trying to get how to
play this boring game</p>

 

[#1_War_Poet_ForLife]

This is not a game...</p>

It is just writing poems.</p>

It's not hard at all.</p>

 

[pegs]

no new haiku's now?</p>

i'm very disappointed.</p>

let's get it going!</p>

 

[GMJ]

Sign Houston to Nets
Lets piss off the New Yorkers
Now thats worth something</p>

In there like swimwear
Ready like spaghetti so...
Why isn't Rod signed?</p>

 

[#1_War_Poet_ForLife]

Thanks GMJigga.</p>

For the kick ass new siggy.</p>

I'm at your service

</p>

 

[Booby]

If Houston is signed</p>

Another threat on the bench</p>

Still hole in frontcourt

</p>

 

[#1_War_Poet_ForLife]

We need scores inside.</p>

For us to be succesful.</p>

That would be quite. nice</p>

 

[shookem]

i love this thread. </p>

One of the best on the net. </p>

relaxing yet invigorating.</p>

i'm not sure i did that right.</p>

 

[#1_War_Poet_ForLife]

You screwed up badly.</p>

You must follow the format.</p>

It's 5 7 5. </p>

 

[shookem]

Hmmm,</p>

The atlantic has champs</p>

Raptors, Nets and Celtics are</p>

going to change the game.</p>

?</p>

 

[#1_War_Poet_ForLife]

No, no, no, no, no.</p>

Haiku's are 3 line poems.</p>

Go 5 7 5</p>

 

[pegs]

be more specific.</p>

you must count the syllables.</p>

it's not all that hard.</p>

 

[pegs]

yay, Booby! good job.</p>

are you new doing Haikus?</p>

yay, new haikuers.</p>

 

[#1_War_Poet_ForLife]

Didn't have enough room.</p>

Or I would have told him it all.</p>

But ran out of room.</p>

 

[Dumpy]

My favorite ones</p>

are those that try to explain</p>

how to write haikus.</p>

 

[GMJ]

There is nothing wrong
listening to The Prodigy
5am in dark.