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"Enthusiasm"... No,
I have low levels of it.
I care for few things.
 
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (huevonkiller @ Aug 7 2008, 01:26 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Enthusiasm...
I have low levels of it.
I care for few things.</div>

Huevon writes a ku!?
Indoctrination is strong
A future Nets fan
 
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (GMJigga @ Aug 7 2008, 12:36 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (huevonkiller @ Aug 7 2008, 01:26 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Enthusiasm...
I have low levels of it.
I care for few things.</div>

Huevon writes a ku!?
Indoctrination is strong
A future Nets fan
</div>

<u>Melancholy Haiku (wtf, why not
)</u>

I know how to smile
And play along with others,
But I am unmoved.

I am quite distant,
I tire of the facade,
I am more than "this".

Edit- (Continued in post below)
 
Your first ku is flawed
"I know how to smile," 6
...but is about Nets
 
Smile is two though!
Smile, Smile, Smi-le, yeah...
I count two of them :-(
 
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (GMJigga @ Aug 7 2008, 12:55 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div><div class='quotemain'>Smile is two though!
Smile, Smile, Smi-le, yeah...
I count two of them :-(</div>

It is okay Jig,
I hope your birthday was great.
You are a cool guy.

(BTW, I had to edit my first haiku at the top, so we all mess up sometimes.)

<u>End of melancholy haiku:</u>

Some time passes by;
I attain a new status,
I can see ahead.

I slowly improve;
my days seem brighter, better.
I'll be content soon.

(These last two parts are not about S2, it is just me talking about how I am more content in general.)
 
Welcome to new site
Yellow colors change to blue
Send PM's, if lost.
 
The look bothers me.
But the features of this site
Give me a hardon.
 
Hopelessness while lost.
Quick PM to mod Jigga.
No longer confused.
 
I hurt my ankle.
But I'm still ballin today.
Nothing can stop me.
 
You should have seen it
Pegs went up for a lay up
And "Carter'd" himself
 
Not sure what you meant
I went up for a layup
But fell awkwardly

I still made it though
That's what matters most, I say
I'll "Carter", play hurt
 
Hi, this my first haiku
You may have more posts than me
But I love Nets, too

I'll post more often
Once this damn off-season ends
I shall prove myself
 
They are missed by all
But foward we must go now
They will be back soon.
 
They're coming back? Word?
Do you know something I don't?
Are you a big tease?
 
Yo I am the Czar
I am here to say hello to the "Dumpy"
He makes Nancy Newman look like Joumana Kidd
 
Hey, Czar! Learn the rules!
It goes five, seven, then five
You're better than that!
 
I'm above the law
Dumpalicious, Dumpy, Dumps
Some play checkers, other play chess
I prefer monopoly.
 
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