Vince Carter - Amaze

[rjnavarrete]

Comments?

 

[rjnavarrete]

Second version

 

[TimFlem]

Yes there's some comments and a little suggestions as well. Let's see the only and first thing I like about this wall is the top where the text Vince Carter is. I like that whole thing I'll give you that. BUT i remineds me of some elements from various walls from various places mainly some on WCR. The cutoff text reminds me of Psmurfs and the whole grey thing reminds me of Nana's. I know you didn;t try to do this but sometimes things happens. Now the blur is not needed.He's standing in one place unlike driving or going to the hoop therefore it isn't needed. I don't like the font or effect you put on the other 2 texts. It isn't attracting my eye that much. I really don't get the whole theme of the wall but it isn't your best obviously. SO work on your next wall for awhile and make it real HOT. OK
BTW second version is much better. Just add some detail in the b/g like lines and grids at low opacity.

 

[rjnavarrete]

Aight man. And sorry if it looks like a rip fomr anything... I didn't try to do that. I just thought of those things in my head and I thought they would look cool. BTW, it's not like Nana and Psmurf are the only people to do that. And thanks for the tips and comments Tim.

 

[TimFlem]

<div class="quote_poster">Quoting RJ 21:</div><div class="quote_post">Aight man. And sorry if it looks like a rip fomr anything... I didn't try to do that. I just thought of those things in my head and I thought they would look cool. BTW, it's not like Nana and Psmurf are the only people to do that. And thanks for the tips and comments Tim.</div>
I know that but the vince carter text is cutoff like psmurfs yao ming text and it was the first to come in my mind along with the silvery effect going on in the bars Nana's wall was the first that came into my mind. Just giving you my input. Keep working man you have the attutude and determination to be great.

 

[KBC]

The 2nd version is way better. Personally though, I don't like how the text is cutoff, I don't know, I just don't like it. I like the lower opacity on the text in the backround though. I wouldn't change the 2nd one unless you wanna take TF's advice and add stuff to the backround. But don't add to much. Simplicity is always good.'

Off topic: Thi sis my first post in this forum. I didn't even know it existed! I just got fifty posts a while ago, and I was going around the forums, and I noticed this for the first time. It's cool. I like how they make you wait for a while before you see all of the forums.

 

[rjnavarrete]

Took TF's advice:

 

[KBC]

It's much better now. I give it a 8/10 now.

 

[Smoke]

yeh thats sweet now 8.9/10

 

[rjnavarrete]

Bump, Bump, Bump it up.......

More comments, plz. Tips, etc. welcome too! I want to get better.