Nope. The Gospel of Jesus Christ is simple. Any and all translations steer towards that same simple meaning. I only post these other translations (particularly, The Message) as to bring it into modern day terms. Again, the basic, simple message is the same. In fact, Jesus said we should come to him as little children (ie. full of wonderment, faith, and without a bunch of pre-conceived notions/agendas.)
I thought you were using The Message, even the author admits he's taking a lot of liberties with the bible.
New International Version 9. “This, then, is how you should pray: ‘Our Father in heaven, hallowed be your name,
10. your kingdom come, your will be done on earth as it is in heaven.
11. Give us today our daily bread.
12. Forgive us our debts, as we also have forgiven our debtors.
13. And lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from the evil one.’
King James Version 9. After this manner therefore pray ye: Our Father which art in heaven, Hallowed be thy name.
10. Thy kingdom come, Thy will be done in earth, as it is in heaven.
11. Give us this day our daily bread.
12. And forgive us our debts, as we forgive our debtors.
13. And lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil: For thine is the kingdom, and the power, and the glory, for ever. Amen.
New King James Version 9. In this manner, therefore, pray: Our Father in heaven,Hallowed be Your name.
10. Your kingdom come. Your will be done on earth as it is in heaven.
11. Give us this day our daily bread.
12. And forgive us our debts, As we forgive our debtors.
13. And do not lead us into temptation, but deliver us from the evil one. For Yours is the kingdom and the power and the glory forever. Amen.
New Living Translation 9. Pray like this: Our Father in heaven, may your name be kept holy.
10. May your Kingdom come soon. May your will be done on earth, as it is in heaven.
11. Give us today the food we need,
12. and forgive us our sins, as we have forgiven those who sin against us.
13. And don’t let us yield to temptation, but rescue us from the evil one.
The Message
9-13 With a God like this loving you, you can pray very simply. Like this:
Our Father in heaven,
Reveal who you are.
Set the world right;
Do what's best— as above, so below.
Keep us alive with three square meals.
Keep us forgiven with you and forgiving others.
Keep us safe from ourselves and the Devil.
You're in charge!
You can do anything you want!
You're ablaze in beauty!
Yes. Yes. Yes.
Although
The Message is used commonly in congregations, Peterson stated his uneasiness with this in a
Christianity Today interview:
“ When I'm in a congregation where somebody uses [
The Message] in the Scripture reading, it makes me a little uneasy. I would never recommend it be used as saying, "Hear the Word of God from
The Message." But it surprises me how many do.
[4] ”