Cadillac Wall

[PurplePeopleEaters]

Tell me if this is better than my recent walls. I'm working on becoming a solid wall maker and i need feedback. Also if people could give me techniques to use to make this wall even better. Thanks. I'm still learning. C+C please.

 

[JHair]

Yeah man, this is definitely one of your better walls, the only thing you really could do to help this one, I feel like the text is toooo blended with the bg, especially the subtext. It's just hard to see if you know what I mean.You're definitely showing some improvement though with your walls. Keep em comin!

 

[Smar19]

Very Kool man , good work , little too much white for me , but still good work.

 

[Street]

I like everything here, but the background looks too empty.